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Lullaby of the Leaves

Rustling leaves, lull me to sleep As softly softly dreamscapes creep Spiral my thoughts, like the dance of the leaf Drift me softly, softly to sleep Sing to me, til I'm in dreamland Let me sink into slumbers quicksand Soothe me, soothe me with your lullabies Softly, softly as I close my eyes Rustling leaves, sound of breeze through tree Hearts connect, as you sing to me Softly spiral into slumber sinking You and I drift away, no more thinking 2nd place Joe Bonamassa And Beth Hart Inspiration Poetry Contest 13th May 2023 Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori Lullaby of the Leaves

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Date: 12/6/2023 12:38:00 PM
I wish I could have read this lullaby last night when I was trying to get back to sleep @ 3am. Seriously it is a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win in SO’s contest. SuZ
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/6/2023 2:18:00 PM
Thanks SuZ - I think this is my only lullaby but I was pleased at how pretty it turned out. Maybe I'll do the audio if I ever upgrade from a crackly phone microphone :)
Date: 12/6/2023 7:49:00 AM
Just gorgeous. God bless you and Congrats on your top win. Love, Gina
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Date: 12/6/2023 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Gina, I don't write like this often so thought I'd give it another outing x
Date: 12/6/2023 6:37:00 AM
Im loving the imagery and alliterations in this beautiful poem. Pleasure reading as always, congratulations on being on the winners list
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/6/2023 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, much appreciated
Date: 12/6/2023 5:52:00 AM
Would have been nice to have one of your many none contest poems, but if this one means a lot to you then that is fine...This one is deep.. Thanks for taking part in my contest, and hope you dont mind my modern way of judging... so much easier, yanno... Congratulations on your showcasing your poem
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Silent One
Date: 12/6/2023 11:07:00 AM
stay home and watch Netflix...
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:01:00 AM
How will we be prepared for the outside world if you declare everyone a winner haha :) I entered hastily. I'm not sure what I'd pick as a personal favourite but I can certainly go kookier for a future entry. I played safe
Date: 5/15/2023 6:18:00 AM
Brilliant poem, DD, softly, softly...
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Date: 5/15/2023 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Jo :)
Date: 5/14/2023 6:58:00 PM
"Soothe me, soothe me with your lullabies Softly, softly as I close my eyes" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/14/2023 11:45:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, glad you liked it :)
Date: 5/13/2023 10:51:00 PM
I will recite this tonight when I am trying to go to sleep to see if your lovely lullaby words...nice, dreamy write DD
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Date: 5/13/2023 11:47:00 PM
Thank you Paul :)

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