LULLABY

LULLABY
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lulled by languid lullabies
leaves lay light, lost in dreams
morning mist mingles muted
whispers of warmth woven in web of the soul

12th gradeautumnmorningalliteration

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Sotto Poet

September 3, 2025 at 1:41 AM

Such lovely echoes, a hush to the tangled words! Calls to mind the swift approach of autumn's embrace!

sara Etgen-Baker

September 3, 2025 at 5:35 PM

so true, Sotto. I was noticing today that some leaves are slowly changing color, and I also saw my first acorn fall out of our tree...I can handle fall, but I'm not a winter person. thanks for stopping by, Sara

Line Gauthier

September 2, 2025 at 5:44 PM

Quiet the tongue twister ~ lol Particularly loved your last line

sara Etgen-Baker

September 3, 2025 at 5:31 PM

thanks, Line. Your comments are meaningful...glad you liked the last line...it truly was just a last minute addition. have a pleasant evening, Sara

Crystol Woods

September 2, 2025 at 10:30 AM

Very beautiful alliteration! Reminds me of the autumn coming upon us so fast! Xo

sara Etgen-Baker

September 2, 2025 at 4:42 PM

thanks, Crystol...yes, fall is definitely upon us. I even saw leaves changing color ever so slightly...rare sight in my part of Texas...poetry hugs, Sar