Lucy

So I have met a beautiful soul. But my past has taken it's toll! It's hard for me to trust even harder for me to believe From my heart to my soul a sense of relieve. One can only hope for the same affection. Then head in the right direction. I will not lie my heart has grown colder, As I do grow older. Lucy is the name that put a beat in my heart. I believe this is a great start. A Muse My Muse

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 10/26/2024 2:03:00 PM

Lovely poem enjoyed reading your work here many blessings Lucy sounds like a great start to romance

Jay Moore
Date: 10/31/2024 8:13:00 AM

Thanks. Never know.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/21/2024 8:13:00 PM

Lucy sounds like the right girl. I hope you meet. Nice poem.

Jay Moore
Date: 10/31/2024 8:14:00 AM

Me too. Thank you.

Sean Wilde

Date: 10/20/2024 11:23:00 PM

Nice poem. Very relatable. Perfect choice of words.

Jay Moore
Date: 10/31/2024 8:15:00 AM

Thanks.

Eyon Nobody

Date: 10/20/2024 9:59:00 PM

I’m old too. I could feel what you write when you say «my past has taken it’s toll, it’s hard for me to trust, even harder for me to believe». Thank you

Jay Moore
Date: 10/31/2024 8:15:00 AM

Yep. I'm not getting old again!

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/19/2024 3:40:00 AM

Awesome write tender passionate piece enjoyed reading your poem here many blessings.

Jay Moore
Date: 10/31/2024 8:16:00 AM

Thank you.