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Lucky 8

I summon you hastily, blazing moon For pulchritude, for charisma of grace When discomfort from pain…I must embrace A spine bent, eight hours in a bed’s cocoon— Plagued by revelation that feet won’t run Or hike through lowlands I wildly adore : Once a paragon , luck rates me as done, Yet with grit, your flame…breaths dare, win this war! Contest sponsored by Laura Loo: Ryme Time 5- Lucky 8 Written 7/30/2018

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Date: 8/2/2018 7:41:00 PM
Wonderful piece ,Nette...Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 8/2/2018 7:05:00 PM
Congrats!!! Nette with this poetic beauty...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/2/2018 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win with this great moon poem:)
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Date: 8/1/2018 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 7/30/2018 9:13:00 PM
Excellent Nette, Congrats on your win with this very touching poem...hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/30/2018 4:08:00 PM
congratulations nette, this one hit home, my oldest is in a wheelchair from a car accident 23 years ago...
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Date: 7/30/2018 11:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win for this wonderfully written poem, Nette. John
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Date: 7/29/2018 8:50:00 PM
Finding strength within when mobility is but a dream..Nicely penned Nette
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Date: 7/29/2018 8:42:00 PM
A beautiful entry you have penned Nette. Those words are a challenge and you blended them brilliantly! : )
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Date: 7/29/2018 6:26:00 PM
I can see you winning every war with words of grace and beauty. You have interweaved each word beautifully Nette, Gl in the contest.
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Date: 7/29/2018 4:58:00 PM
You put an amazing spin on the theme with your words. Love it.
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Date: 7/29/2018 4:33:00 PM
Well written and executed..you wrapped the words well into your theme..enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry, nette.
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