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Lucky 8

The first time I saw you I had followed your blazing trail that your fleeting figure of eight furrowed in my heart. Beguiled, I began to madly adore you from the start, the paragon of beauty your pulchritude never became frail. Many years later it was an unpleasant revelation for me when you had revealed you were under a spell of discomfort, for to make you mine I had in an obtuse way made the effort. It didn’t matter, in my heart the aura of your charisma I still see.
July 7, 2018

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Date: 7/31/2018 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/1/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your visit.
Date: 7/30/2018 12:22:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Warm wishes.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/1/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:57:00 AM
This is simply wonderful!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:53:00 AM
Thank you, Lyric.

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