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There's no discomfort as you hold her near For she's a paragon in your eyes your blazing passion will then rise, A revelation of love of one so dear Steal a kiss from the one you adore Give her eight more kisses if you will Your charisma will give her a thrill, Her pulchritude is your allure - 7-4-18 Rhyme Time 5- Lucky 8 Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 8/7/2018 5:36:00 PM
back with my congrats, I can't find a new poem of yours to read yet!!
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Date: 8/1/2018 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Joseph on your deserving win.
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/15/2018 6:00:00 PM
I never can write poems with required words, this take some talent! well done, Joseph!
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:41:00 PM
Joseph, you managed to fit all the required words in seamlessly in your lovely poem. Best of luck in the contest, but I don't think you will need it. : )
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Date: 7/14/2018 8:54:00 AM
Very well done, Joseph! Great write...best of luck in the contest...Charlie
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Date: 7/14/2018 6:39:00 AM
Very nicely composed. All the best
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:22:00 PM
Looks great... good luck.
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Date: 7/8/2018 5:16:00 PM
I am amazed how everyone is doing this challenge and making it look easy. Great entry, Joseph.
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Date: 7/8/2018 11:48:00 AM
love how you did this so effortlessly, joseph... applause!..huggs
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Date: 7/8/2018 10:03:00 AM
You made good use of your words. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:06:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully composed poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/6/2018 3:15:00 PM
- Beautiful and sweet written, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:26:00 PM
Hi Joseph, You did a good job with the chosen. I can't come up with anything. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:45:00 PM
Excellent Joseph! You have used the 8 words perfectly with this beautiful poem :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/5/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 7/5/2018 6:16:00 AM
Joseph.. one of the very best for this contest!!
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Joseph May
Date: 7/5/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you LM
Date: 7/5/2018 6:08:00 AM
This looks hard to do..you crafted it with great flow and rhyme..best for a win, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/5/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 7/5/2018 1:31:00 AM
you wove the words in so beautifully Joseph, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 7/5/2018 4:08:00 AM
Thank you Jan..hugs

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