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Luck and Heaven

If I am in Luck, Heaven is near Showered and waxed,good atmosphere Dressed to kill or should say thrill His libido has gone downhill Viagra worked, gave a thankful cheer
Penned May 21 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 5/27/2015 6:44:00 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
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Date: 5/25/2015 7:15:00 AM
Lovely limerick Seren.. Very cute and humorous!
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Date: 5/23/2015 12:22:00 PM
Hahaha. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 5/23/2015 4:28:00 AM
lol Seren - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:57:00 AM
Lol...very funny Seren
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