Luck and Heaven

If I am in Luck, Heaven is near Showered and waxed,good atmosphere Dressed to kill or should say thrill His libido has gone downhill Viagra worked, gave a thankful cheer
Penned May 21 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 6:44 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
Das Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Hahaha. Enjoyed this.
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 4:28 AM
lol Seren - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 2:57 AM
Lol...very funny Seren
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