Lucifer's Laments

"Lucifer's Laments" By M. Taha Effendi (Dramatic Monologue) Do You not see, Almighty God, How Your order man defied? So base, so vile, so gravely flawed, Yet so consumed by pride! He broke all sacred codes though warned, He dared to pay no heed, He mocked Your words, Your gifts he scorned, He breached what You decreed, Beyond the holy saint's facade, There hides a worthless cheat, A savage beast, a thief, a fraud, The master of deceit, Too weak to tame his lust and greed, To feel remorse, too vain, Power, wealth his only creed, And Your worship he disdains, He quenched his thirst with blood he spilled, In countless wars he waged, Centuries wore on. Millions killed, Civilizations laid to waste, But he prides this life of sin and crime, As he leads himself astray! His humanity lost in his race with time, And by the error of his way, Why then My Lord was I expelled? Was mine a darker sin? I am the angel that rebelled, But is not man my evil twin? To salve his conscience, me he blames, When he himself is full of vice, While in his heart surely he shames, To have staged his own demise, It is a myth his vice I feed, He writes himself his fate, Man: A far more disgusting breed, Not merely my incarnate! (Finalist - International Poetry Soup Contest 2011)
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Wesley Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 6:20 PM
So good to read this again. That last verse probably has a lot more truth in it than when you wrote this. Every day I wake up and find there are new catastrophes to ponder. Hope all is well with you Taha, you being on the other side of the world is amazing to me as I write this! Love, Elizabeth
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July 11, 2012 at 8:27 PM
I'm finding what you say in the last two lines is so true. It hurts to know of all that man is doing to his brother and we are all brothers and sisters. - So good to find your name on my page Taha, always feel special when you visit with your sweet comments. Thanks! :)
Wesley Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:37 AM
I never tire of reading great poetry and this certainly rate high. The wisdom in the story compels one to think and absorb these stunning truths.
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December 2, 2011 at 10:49 PM
very intriguing..... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.
Effendi Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 11:19 PM
You speak the truth, Taha. And you've spoken well enough to leave a lasting impact on the reader. Keep it up
Wesley Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Deep dark truths that every one should be aware of. The 7th verse starts into a realm to consider as we humans willingly make a pact with the evil one. Superb thinking and verse!
Song Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 5:58 PM
I will have to go back and see how far this gem made it in the International Poetry Contest. It is a super powerful monologue...dramatic to say the least...this is what great poetry is made of...teaching all sides of an issue as in a poetic debate! Best to you...I still say Get thee behind me Satan...all the time! :) Hugs to U and your amazing work, Gwendolen
Effendi Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 12:42 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I stand indebted to you.
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Taha. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Effendi Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:29 PM
I cannot thank you enough for the support you have given me since I joined this beautiful world of poetry soup. Thank you so much for being there. Love, Taha
Yamin Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Dear Taha, I congratulate you on your poem winning the semi final in the contest. It is a well deserved win, indeed. I wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad Yamin
Effendi Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Thank you for inspiring me into writing poetry. I owe so much to you uncle.
Nubani Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 2:57 AM
Wonderful <3<3 :D !!
Harris Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 8:31 AM
great write, very imaginative, I really enjoyed reading it.
Duffin Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Hi Taha. What a great idea. Most of us are afraid to walk in the devil's shoes. I might be wrong but to me this conveys the fact that without evil we could not have good. Great write. Thanks, Eamon
Elward Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 8:51 PM
good read good job well done
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October 24, 2010 at 10:34 AM
Wow I love it. He has a lot to answer for. I really enjoyed this poem
Palli Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 1:47 AM
You've put to words exactly how evil this world is! I look forward to the time when God will take over! (Revelation21:3,4)
Maverick Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 12:01 PM
very intresting its a big subject that you have tackled here,however well done! oh, and thank you for your intrest in my write.
Pringle Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Wow, this is fantastic. To my favorite poems it goes!
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October 22, 2010 at 8:55 AM
What a lucid and truthful findings you have molded here in the form of this beautiful Poem. The facts revealed by you are the basic issues accepted and not obeyed by those who believe that they are the money Gods of this materialistic world, but forget that death is not going to impart them forever. Alas! If all human can understand it. Great write my friend and many thanks for your kind comments. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.....Taha Effendi
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 1:09 PM
eloquent!
Effendi Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 1:00 AM
Thanks for appreciating my poetry Linda. Thanks
Effendi Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 12:59 AM
Thnanks for liking my poetry Kyle.
Effendi Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 12:58 AM
Thank you for your words of encouragement Ruben. Thanks for appreciating my poem.
Effendi Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 12:03 AM
Thank you friends. Man does create a scapegoat everytime he errs when actually he is responsible for his own actions.
Carlson Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:16 PM
Excellent! "He quenched his thirst with blood he spilled in pointless wars he waged? Come one that is awesome.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Excellent write Taha ...the struggle of good and evil is ever present... appreciate your lovely comments on my poetry today .. and welcome to the soup site.. hope u enjoy your time here and will enter the contests offered ..a sure way to have your poetry read and noticed more frequently luv..
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