Linda Alice Fowler Poet Sonnet

Lucidity

Good writing , like gold , combines lustrous lucidity with high density. What this means is good writing is packed with hints. ~ Eric Hoffer

And should I cherish lucid moments of my day
to dwell on how my words will paint the blue vellum?
Or dream that in those lucid thoughts may lie the way
to philosophies protected by dark pelham?

Soon to write my thoughts in a pleasing structured form,
I turn to flow my life for all to analyze.
Is it eloquence I seek, or a bright brainstorm
to loosely form coherent thoughts and crystallize?

Basking in boastful brilliance, words outflow freely,
purest unbridled revelry is extended 
to writing fraught with inner secrets genteelly
hidden in subtle between-the-lines pretended.

Laying my pen aside, I read what is written.
Word by word, in silence, I am humbly smitten.

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Robert Lindley August 13, 2023 at 10:12 AM My friend, yet again I agree whole heartedly with my good friend Bill. You have gifted magnificent verses in this fine sonnet. Adding this gem to my fav list, God bless. Linda Alice Fowler August 14, 2023 at 1:46 PM You are very kind Robert. Many thanks for your thoughtful comment. I am honored by the fav! :)

Bill Baker July 26, 2023 at 4:22 PM Ahh, another fine sonnet, Linda. The rhythm and flow are so smooth, easy to read and enjoy. Humility is a virtue, bless you and your poetry. Have a great week, my Texas friend. Bill Linda Alice Fowler August 2, 2023 at 6:48 AM Hi neighbor! Thanks for the great visit and comments Bill. I appreciate you! :)

Joanna Daniel July 25, 2023 at 9:46 AM 'Vellam', 'pelham', new words for me, Linda, great sonnet, you write so coolly:) Linda Alice Fowler August 2, 2023 at 6:47 AM Hi Jo. Ah, your words are like cream in my tea - a welcome addition! Thank you! :)

Speaks Volumes July 24, 2023 at 9:21 AM I too am humbly smitten by your beautiful lucid words.. This is truly a thoughtful beautifully written Poem. A favorite.. Linda Alice Fowler August 2, 2023 at 6:45 AM Hi Svvie!! Nice to see you here today. Thanks for the comment and for the fav! :) laf

Valsa George July 23, 2023 at 7:47 PM I too am 'smitten' by your verse Linda. So much of your thoughts about a great poem are packed in your lines. Poetry is not a child's game. It has to be approached with solemnity and dedication. Linda Alice Fowler July 24, 2023 at 5:23 AM Thank you dear Valsa. I always appreciate your insightful and thoughtful comments. I hope you day goes well!