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March- 24-2025
This is What I Call Loyal Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Mystic Rose Rose

 

From life, when all else passes away True love will stay and never ever decay Defying all impediments, it will survive Leaving sweet memories, it will thrive. Cementing hearts, it will make life jubilant. It is never manipulative or fraudulent Love is a flame burning bright and true A light house in the sea for mariners to view. In ill health and poverty, it will never subside In rain and heat, it will prosper and never fade. It is staying together through highs and lows, Even when years pass and life painfully slows. It is not just a fleeting passion but a commitment. A bond that will brave every predicament. It is one of mutual loyalty, trust and care A connection that is strong and rare. Everything else is secondary, so hold it tight, For it ‘s a beacon in the darkest night.

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Date: 3/25/2025 1:44:00 AM
Refreshingly romantic account of true love Balsa! Think you have a winner here! Good luck!
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Date: 3/24/2025 3:36:00 PM
Very well said. Love is the most important expression we have. Make of yourself, Love, through-in and throughout -- and you will be right for another to bless.
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Date: 3/24/2025 1:30:00 PM
Dear poetess Valsa, this amazing poem exemplifies the eternal and unyielding character of real love. It stresses that true love overcomes obstacles, perseveres in the face of adversity, and builds a strong emotional bond between people. The poem also addressed issues of love, devotion, resilience, and the long-term consequences of genuine attachment. It presents love as a powerful and transformational energy that flourishes in all conditions. The language of the poem is passionate and vivid. Words like "genuine love," "jubilant," "flame," "commitment," "loyalty," and "rare" reflect powerful emotions and the intensity of love. The employment of adjectives improves the positive representation of love and its characteristics.
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Date: 3/24/2025 12:51:00 PM
Real love overcomes all obstacles in life, you become invincible. Best of luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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Date: 3/24/2025 11:14:00 AM
True love is loyal love. Trust is the backbone. Nice poem.
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Date: 3/24/2025 10:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Loyal Love" write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a blessed spring day writing away.........
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Date: 3/24/2025 6:52:00 AM
Yes, true love defies all odds. When we are young, we really don't know what love is but growing into adulthood then into old age we learn what love is really all about. Sara K
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Date: 3/24/2025 6:09:00 AM
Powerful poem Valsa. Well said. Love should be permanent and it goes beyond what modern culture defines love.
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Date: 3/24/2025 5:51:00 AM
That last line is so true. When I'm down on myself all I have to do is look at myself in her eyes and it gives me a little boost. Awesome write Valsa
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Date: 3/24/2025 4:57:00 AM
- Loyal love will survive strong and rare ... a beautiful poem, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely new week :) - hugs
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