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Loyal Enemies

We were once 
as close as lovers
sharing things
no one knew
secrets, clues of inner worlds
our souls unfurled

Betrayal
struck so suddenly
caught us both
by surprise
narrowed eyes, reassessing
messing with our minds

Ties unwind
unravel, turn loose
sad excuse
for friendship
ripping, tearing all apart
from the heart outward

We remain
loyal enemies
more than mere
"frenemies"
for neither can afford to
rat the other out!

Copyright © Rhona Mcferran | Year Posted 2019

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Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/12/2019 1:07:00 PM So perfectly sums up those 'loyal enemies' who are caught up in secrets together! Login to Reply Rhona Mcferran Date: 4/12/2019 11:27:00 PM I've definitely had experience... ;P

Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/2/2019 9:00:00 PM This poem is beautifully done, and the ending line made me laugh so hard! "betrayal struck so suddenly..." this is how it does. I love it that you are on the phone with me while I type this! Login to Reply Rhona Mcferran Date: 4/2/2019 9:54:00 PM Had to get on here & see what you wrote about me... ;P hahaha! Glad the ending gave you a laugh! ;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/31/2019 8:54:00 AM oh. yes. Good one! xomo ;) Login to Reply Rhona Mcferran Date: 3/31/2019 7:33:00 PM Thanks!! ...I see you've been there, too! ;)