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Low Tide

Low tide The tide slips out and the sand becomes part of time Sifting moments into memories scattered along a shore of neglected feelings, disappearing on the dampened outline of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/22/2017 8:40:00 AM
As I adore the sea/ocean I had to read your entry. The entry and your words did not disappoint. I have seen a few of your poems and allow me to say you can compose and compose poetry. Well done
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Date: 2/18/2017 4:48:00 PM
Very beautiful, full of melancholy.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Arthur
Date: 2/18/2017 12:04:00 AM
Oww, 7 and fav. One of the compact ones, isn't is? Just like the others, this one is PACKED with meaning, imagery and emotion. So powerful and fantastic Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Darren, yep, it is a compact, you are right.
Date: 2/17/2017 11:06:00 PM
this is a masterpiece and a fav. Hugs dear friend
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve.
Date: 2/17/2017 6:23:00 PM
Gorgeous writing. You seamlessly weave ocean elements with sad emotions that are intensified by the shape as your words feel more despairing against the vastness of the ocean. Maybe that's just me; but it is quite profound :-) Truly a pleasure to read such skillful writing. blessings, lynn
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Lynn for your kind thoughts on my work. I appreciate your visit. The ocean is always a source of inspiration to me, whether it be happy or sad. It is big enough to handle all emotions. : )
Date: 2/17/2017 6:07:00 PM
Really resonates with me Chris as earlier today I sat and watched the tide ebbing and flowing and took time to reflect on life:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I appreciate your nice comment. It is always nice to sit and watch nature, it is so soothing.

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