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Loving You Kills Me

When you are near…. To hold you is an amazing feeling, the power it brings. To see you is a heavenly sin, the beauty so divine. To smell your skin is a joy, the scent so comforting. To hear you is music to my ears, the sound of angels within. To touch you brings me hope, the knowing, you are true. To taste you is a priceless gift, the sweetness in your kiss. To dream of you is pure elation, the gift to be with you forever. To talk to you is instant bliss, the way it all makes sense. To know you is a great infatuation, the time I love spending. However when I miss you…. To hold you is a tender feeling, your ability to cause me pain. To see you is a anxious feeling, your beauty so blinding. To smell your skin can upset, your sent that holds memories. To hear your voice echoes eternally, your sound numbs my core. To touch you gives false hope, your absent soul, you are unseen. To taste you is at a price, your sweetness can overwhelm. To dream of you is pure torment, your gift is to be here. To talk to you would be silent, your presence would prove me unspoken. To know you greatly aches, your time is something I would gladly conceal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 2:58:00 PM
Deep,beautiful and touching..Charma
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Date: 3/3/2010 4:17:00 PM
Lovely romantic words Gareth and a joy to read your inner emotions expressed.. a great comment on Raul's blog today and keep trying the contests..don't give up or get discouraged if u don't win first time around... keep at it ..u definitely have the talent to compete..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/3/2010 2:47:00 PM
Great passionate write about your great love of someone special. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...."The Angel" I have added the other six lines if you care to look for they make it a more complete work. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:06:00 AM
Alright Gareth. Please read my poem the peoples poet After reading your poems and your comment I think i wote something that shows signs of improvement. Cheers Fella , have a nice day
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:21:00 PM
I know what you mean, Gareth...that's the whole package, right there. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Gareth. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:38:00 PM
love is a drug . compleat with depresion. john
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:01:00 PM
Another emotion filled gem Gareth >> James
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:45:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem. I loved your write it made me feel , its a ittle to real to my heart which is the point. Please take the time to have a little read of my other work and comment, Ill look through yours Chhers
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