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Loving The Night--SF

Darkness seems to grow so quickly in the wooded garden of night. Scattered breezes like fairy wings; moonlight peeping towards the earth dusting the trees in silhouette. On the winds a few notes mingle with far off laughter,delighted cries. Sounds of happy dancing feet can be heard in the distance,nearby too. Lovers twirl under the streetlamps while casting wishes upon the starry skies. The night is tailor-made for passion. Fears are forgotten,swept away. Tribulations of the day merely embers now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/18/2013 7:04:00 PM
, Awesome free verse win Deb, have a nice day..PD
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Date: 11/18/2013 7:27:00 AM
Beautiful images and feelings dance through this poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/18/2013 12:01:00 AM
what a delicious night, deb...sending you my best congrats and huggs!..:)
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:02:00 PM
So romantic! Congratulations.
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:22:00 PM
this is just very pretty and I like how it describes such a pleasant feeling! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 11/13/2013 4:04:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:17:00 PM
A strong embrace of the crux of an onyx night. Fantastic!
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Date: 11/10/2013 10:51:00 AM
wowoow, deb...you create a mood that makes me feel your sensitivity.. breathtaking view from here.. :) huggs
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:20:00 AM
Great imagery... Terry
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:54:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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