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A Casanova Poem

With a committed one, it is wonderful and decent to chill but you eat the combination of the salad still. Twelve noon is different from nine cos it feels more like the day then longing for midnight all because the sun has gone away. You lie on rocks, sands and then swamps to feel all of earth it is because of you more girls come through birth. Flexible lips and serpent eyes were your weaknesses yesterday charming hips and arrogant breasts take over from them today. Making the decision on one to take that stand and embrace puts fidelity, strength and manliness far from disgrace. You’ve selected that one for you who’s ripe and green but pluck the fruits of different trees everywhere seen. Even a homeless refugee with an amputated knee creates a segment of your taste to make her a nominee. Free flying is this right, fun, decision and liberty to drink life’s wine by using your private property. Such a way of life you continuously employ puts you under loneliness’ trap as a prey not a decoy. Too much sinking makes you carried away by the wave time then slaps to realize no way, another chance can pave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/5/2016 7:43:00 AM
I must say I enjoyed this one even more this time around.
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 11:01:00 AM
woooow! I am delighted, happy and blessed. Thank you so much Richard
Date: 6/30/2016 12:26:00 AM
Love this . So creative
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Kaila
Date: 6/23/2016 6:46:00 PM
But there is always another chance to do what is right..Enjoyed reading your work..Very creative and expressive of your thoughts..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/20/2016 4:02:00 PM
a very creative take on fruit salad!! Interesting images, Funom. How are you doing lately? I don't see you all that much!
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
Date: 6/20/2016 11:31:00 AM
Your Romeo is well described, Funom. I'll stick to sharing dessert with my wife:) ~ Regards // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:58:00 AM
looool. Thank you so much Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2016 7:59:00 AM
A most entertaing write Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard
Date: 6/20/2016 7:54:00 AM
I'll keep it in mind the next time i put my lips on that divine salad
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Khomotso

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