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Lovesick

Sitting in silence i wait for you you. Even though its dark i stay. I went out like a light. I feel a shinning presence before me. Snapping awake. I get a rush of adrenaline. Laying my eyes upon them . My heart skips a thousand beat. I feel a tap of my shoulder. Looking up to them. There face as if all the light in the world had been stolen and put into a face. Hair like silk. Eyes like stars. Voice like the sounds of violin. Home isn't a place to me its them.

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Date: 4/29/2024 11:56:00 PM
Most of us have been lovesick at least once. A valid poem. As we all feel and describe the sickness differently. Your choice of words has given some powerful meaning. For example snapping awake. Will have a look at some of your other poems. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 5/7/2024 12:03:00 AM
thank you<3

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