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Loves Shadow

Is not a man without love a speck of dust frivolously falling in a dream? As he blindly stares as malefic mirrors rust with no reflection to redeem His heart does yearn and may combust where love has lost its gleam The speck is swept in a gust thus forever falling into the infinite stream Whispers fall from sardonic sky as tears accumulate in the sclerosed sea Within the darkness we hear a cry as the sensorial sorrows beg to plea For in loves shadow a black hole does lie filled with dramaturgic debris We ask the question why love distraughtly departs from you and me. Jan.24.2018 CONTEST NO 390 ANY FORM Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/9/2018 6:12:00 AM
Very sad but also very fine verses my friend. Lost love begs for sad verses and you have delivered! A fav.....
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Date: 1/27/2018 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, nicely penned rhyme:)
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:14:00 PM
such sad lines ^WW^ love the alliteration and flow and rhyme of the poem:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, WW. Masterfully done.
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:03:00 AM
Back to say congrats on a great placement in Brian's contest, that is hard to do, but you pulled it off!
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Date: 1/25/2018 3:56:00 AM
Love whispers from your poetic pen, in pain or joy you execute it with such flair, my dear friend. Great to see you back...Maria
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Date: 1/24/2018 8:56:00 PM
So eloquently given dear Warrior. Beautiful.
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Date: 1/24/2018 5:23:00 PM
Great poem - I love the first line, it has an almost biblical ring. And I enjoyed the rhyme and internal rhyme, well done.
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Date: 1/24/2018 3:05:00 PM
Ok first of, I'm super happy to see you back :) Ok, yeah love hurts! Dang it, it's supposed to be the most beautiful thing in this World, yet somehow it can be the worst heartbreaking thing. Like, what's up with that? Lol! Anywho, your poem is beautifully written and I wish you the best of luck in the contest my dear friend... Huge white smile :)
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:24:00 PM
- Each line has its own language ... beautiful ... but sad, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:20:00 AM
Sclerosed sea, dramaturgic debris, don't think those word combinations have ever been written before, great choice of song, Kansas, yeah, brings back memories, such a sad but beautiful write, of course loved the internal rhyme!!
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Date: 1/24/2018 9:26:00 AM
A sad write my friend, love comes and goes though, but not always how we want it to...
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Date: 1/24/2018 7:33:00 AM
Lovely to read you today...Happy to see you here...Your topic is superb...One of the most outstanding songs of all times...and a wonderful poem too...Love is so big it's hard to describe it, even to say this or that about it...All the best WW
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