Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Loves Shadow

Is not a man without love a speck of dust frivolously falling in a dream?
As he blindly stares as malefic mirrors rust with no reflection to redeem
His heart does yearn and may combust where love has lost its gleam
The speck is swept in a gust thus forever falling into the infinite stream

Whispers fall from sardonic sky as tears accumulate in the sclerosed sea
Within the darkness we hear a cry as the sensorial sorrows beg to plea
For in loves shadow a black hole does lie filled with dramaturgic debris
We ask the question why love distraughtly departs from you and me.




Jan.24.2018
CONTEST NO 390 ANY FORM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Robert Lindley March 9, 2018 at 6:12 AM Very sad but also very fine verses my friend. Lost love begs for sad verses and you have delivered! A fav.....

Joanna Daniel January 27, 2018 at 6:11 AM Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, nicely penned rhyme:)

Jan Allison January 25, 2018 at 6:14 PM such sad lines ^WW^ love the alliteration and flow and rhyme of the poem:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier January 25, 2018 at 1:34 PM Congrats on your win, WW. Masterfully done.

John Hamilton January 25, 2018 at 9:03 AM Back to say congrats on a great placement in Brian's contest, that is hard to do, but you pulled it off!

Maria Williams January 25, 2018 at 3:56 AM Love whispers from your poetic pen, in pain or joy you execute it with such flair, my dear friend. Great to see you back...Maria

FJ Thomas January 24, 2018 at 8:56 PM So eloquently given dear Warrior. Beautiful.

Agnes Krampe January 24, 2018 at 5:23 PM Great poem - I love the first line, it has an almost biblical ring. And I enjoyed the rhyme and internal rhyme, well done.

Akkina Downing January 24, 2018 at 3:05 PM Ok first of, I'm super happy to see you back :) Ok, yeah love hurts! Dang it, it's supposed to be the most beautiful thing in this World, yet somehow it can be the worst heartbreaking thing. Like, what's up with that? Lol! Anywho, your poem is beautifully written and I wish you the best of luck in the contest my dear friend... Huge white smile :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2018 at 1:24 PM - Each line has its own language ... beautiful ... but sad, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton January 24, 2018 at 10:20 AM Sclerosed sea, dramaturgic debris, don't think those word combinations have ever been written before, great choice of song, Kansas, yeah, brings back memories, such a sad but beautiful write, of course loved the internal rhyme!!

Silent One January 24, 2018 at 9:26 AM A sad write my friend, love comes and goes though, but not always how we want it to...

Arturo Michael January 24, 2018 at 7:33 AM Lovely to read you today...Happy to see you here...Your topic is superb...One of the most outstanding songs of all times...and a wonderful poem too...Love is so big it's hard to describe it, even to say this or that about it...All the best WW