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Love's Roller Coaster

A roller coaster ride through passing fancies full throttle through the depths of clanging climbs let go, be free, succumb, you are no longer one hands touch, eyes meet, tomorrow we’ll do that again ©8/7/2018 for – A four line poem on what is love – Poetry Contest

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/11/2018 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Well done!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/9/2018 8:46:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, John - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/9/2018 6:54:00 PM

Love your 'love's roller coaster' take on the contest, John. Well said! Congrats on your win. Sandra

L. J. Carber

Date: 8/9/2018 9:17:00 AM

A good metaphor, John (pretty much describes marriage!) Congrats

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2018 2:33:00 PM

A great description of the ups and downs of being in love and staying together through it all. Congratulations on your second placement John! : )

John Lawless
Date: 8/8/2018 5:27:00 PM

As those who stay together learn.....love is a forever work in progress...Thanks for stopping by.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/8/2018 12:47:00 PM

It is a really interesting take on the subject and your poem sure was a joy to read, many congratulations on your wonderful 2nd position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

John Lawless
Date: 8/8/2018 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Faraz, not only for my placement in the contest but for the challenge of using four lines to encompass the enormity of love's endeavors

Sand Blown

Date: 8/7/2018 8:11:00 AM

i'm not good on full throttle