Loves Regrets

As pure as a frozen waterfall 
Dissolving in spring
My winter heart melted at your touch 
I gave you my all 
I sparkled like effervescent water

My youth blossomed 
Like springs dawning 
Filled with light and joy
My soul I dedicated to you
I bled for you

Like a red, red rose unfolds its bud
At the warmth of the sun
I longed for your embrace 
Your ardent advances-
Your deep kisses reached my depths
Unveiling me – I yielded all

Your hands held my heart
So tenderly - at first
Your love grew me
I so yearned for you
My one and only - true love 

Until your longing for me 
Turned to lust-I wasn’t enough 
To gorge your appetite
You became like a darkened well
That couldn’t be filled

You grew bitter and discontent
Enraged you grabbed and destroyed-
You tore to pieces the very love you craved
Crushing it beneath your sullied feet

I lay bruised and tattered by your abuse
There is nothing left in this broken heart-
Are you satisfied? Is your longing quelled?
Look at what is left of my beauty 
You once called, your noble, red, red rose 

© Brenda V Northeast 25th Jan. 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/27/2012 10:50:00 AM
Impressive and heartfelt write Brenda!
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/27/2012 3:06:00 PM
Thank you : )
Date: 1/26/2012 7:28:00 PM
Your love grew me... passionate write Brenda, a beautiful free forms (like a fairy tale highway inside a city).
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/27/2012 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Nette- I love your analogy : )Love, Bren
Date: 1/26/2012 7:56:00 AM
A great sacrifice should not be rewarded like this. Descriptive and nice, loved, bl
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/27/2012 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Bi- blessings, Bren
Date: 1/26/2012 7:46:00 AM
WoW! A fine piece Brenda. Beautiful description and so much feeling. Good Job. God Bless, JB Thanks so much for your enncouraging comments. God Bless, JB
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/27/2012 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Judy and likewise for your kind comments, Bless you too, Bren : )
Date: 1/26/2012 5:34:00 AM
oh, i am swooning now,brenda... lovely, sentimental imagery that makes the heart sway.. beautiful! :) huggs!
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/26/2012 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Nette, blessings, Bren
Date: 1/26/2012 3:21:00 AM
Lovely poem Brenda !!!oxox love Anne-Lise
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/26/2012 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise : ) Brenda
Date: 1/26/2012 2:35:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments in my poem Brenda really liked this poem enjoyed reading it.......spandan
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/26/2012 3:06:00 AM
Thank you Spandan : ) Blessings, bren
Date: 1/26/2012 12:20:00 AM
This is a little more to read, but worth it. Very clear descriptiveness here Brenda.
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/26/2012 1:15:00 AM
Thank you Robert- very kind of you : ) Bren
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