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A funny look at a girl's roles in the game of love

I'm love’s iPad ready for an embrace. Steve Jobs got credit for the touch interface But mine's up and running with all the updates I'm love's police regulating the pace "you took that curve a little fast - this isn't a race." I'm love's surveyor drawing the lines "the pilgrims want to explore a new area this time." I'm love's conductor - whew - hear the engine whine "A tourist wants the tunnel - he's ready and primed." I'm love's waitress "sir, that's not on the menu." Love's entrepreneur hosting the venue I'm love’s umpire right there in your face… "sorry pal, but you’re out at second base!"

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Date: 7/3/2020 10:42:00 PM
This made me laugh. "I'm love's waitress "sir, that's not on the menu." Great job!
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/4/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Caren =]
Date: 6/21/2020 10:13:00 AM
Great poem Anais
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Date: 6/22/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thank you =]

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