Love's One Arrow

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~ Let fly your arrow, swift and true ... once pierced, my heart bleeds for naught ... but you. ~ Written and submitted on February 7, 2019 For the "A Valentine Crystalline" Poetry Contest Kim Rodrigues, Judge & Sponsor.

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/14/2019 10:04:00 PM

The promise of devotion... there is a sort of purity, innocence and vulnerability in those few words...that made it difficult to comment. A bit like softly closing the door when a babe is asleep???

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/14/2019 12:23:00 PM

How very sweet!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/14/2019 8:47:00 PM

Fifty-five hits before a comment ... I was wondering if I'd even written it, lol. ;-)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/14/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3