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Love's New Dawn

~ Love's new dawn ~ Above a clear lake hangs a faint moon white crescent shape 'tis early June A gentle breeze stirs the air I reach for you but you're not there The water sparkles I seek your reflection Alas, what's revealed 's my painful rejection Nature's benediction now come and gone Tears shed, I await Love's new dawn

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Kelli White

Date: 9/25/2019 7:27:00 PM

Beautiful words and descriptions of a beautiful place, kelli

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/25/2019 8:35:00 PM

To read a lovely comment like this simply makes my evening. Thank you so much, Kelli! Best wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/24/2019 4:44:00 PM

And once again you take me back to Chris! Amazing my friend!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:51:00 PM

It's my pleasure my friend!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 7:21:00 PM

I think that we're all amazing each other these days. As for me, a lot of that is due to Chris' return and to the way we've responded. I'm so happy he's back. And Brenda, I can't thank you enough for all your enthusiastic comments and compliments. Best always, Gershon

Gary Smith

Date: 9/24/2019 4:36:00 PM

Love the flow Gershon, excellent poem. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 7:19:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement and the kind words, Gary. Appreciated. Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2019 2:15:00 PM

This is beautiful Gershon. I can feel the sadness, but the hope in the new dawn :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, Heidi. I appreciate you telling me how this poem affected you. Best wishes, Gershon

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/24/2019 2:03:00 PM

There is always a new dawn Gershon, if not I don't know what we'd do! A lovely poem !!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 3:17:00 PM

Couldn't have said it any better. Thanks for the comment, the feedback---and great to hear from you, Mike! Happy Tuesday (and Wednesday, for that matter!). Cheers, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 9/24/2019 2:02:00 PM

Mr. Romance pens again. :) This was beautiful my friend, the love and the longing are deeply felt.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 3:16:00 PM

Chris, you have made my day once again today with your kind words and encouragement. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2019 1:57:00 PM

The bittersweet. Hug...Kim

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 3:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim! Cheers, Gershon