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Love's Laughter Lost

There is an old bottle 
in New York
with a rolled up letter 
and a rotting cork

That rested in peace 
on a bedside table
near a gray wrinkled lady 
--quite unable-- 

To wash his words 
from her thought 
--for he did sink 
but she did not-- 

She found joy at least 
in our Savior, with hope
of Him wiping each tear away
lest she mope

Every night, Trina lay awake 
to pray
she'd see her Samuel 
in Heaven someday

Where his wish to be with her 
they'd finally realize
and he could gaze 
into her beautiful blue eyes

Carrying on with her life 
God --till the end-- did bless
but with the tender ache... 
of a million laughs less






[That poem was my response to reading "Below Deck on The Titanic" by Richard Lamoureux, another entry in the ‘Titanic-Fare Thee Well” Contest sponsored by Tom Woody. It is a must-read to understand the poignance of my last line! :( poetrysoup.com/poem/below_deck_on_the_titanic_1616315#gt]

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