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Love's Kiss

To feel love's tender touch with gracious hand When hearts render treasure to paradise Desires allowed to express understand To let passion confess without device To know brush of fingers to be sublime As eyes slowly crush quiet in their pause When hearts quiver on borrowed time They'll deliver to love its purest cause To seek lover's lips with its soft caress Equips a mouth with need and silence held A message burning in hearts both confess Stirs heart beats yearning, lover's lips will meld This quiet pause love alone can render As it comes to cause complete surrender 8/3/16 contest Your Best Rhyming Poem -2

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Date: 2/4/2017 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful write Frederick, full of feeling, great rhyme and meter,35/40 good enough for shared third place! Thanks for entering!
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Date: 8/27/2016 1:26:00 PM
Very nicely expressed, Frederick. My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 8/17/2016 8:37:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats.
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:19:00 PM
Frederic, back again to again read your lovely Sonnet. Congratulations on your win in this 'surrender' Premiere contest. Sandra
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Date: 8/17/2016 2:08:00 PM
A very romantic write Frederic, well done!
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Date: 8/17/2016 12:34:00 PM
Hi Frederick, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/9/2016 8:58:00 AM
This is simply beautiful in it's clarity of message and emotion. POTD worthy. I'm starting to get to know your writing and the more I read the more I like, you have a tender heart, shines through in you writing!A7
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Date: 8/6/2016 7:32:00 AM
I just love your poetry. I always have and I always will. A beautiful romantic sonnet with a sublime couplet to close it off. A Fav!
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Date: 8/5/2016 6:07:00 PM
THIS is well done Fred----congratulation on making Poem of the day
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Date: 8/5/2016 10:57:00 AM
Hi Frederick, You have penned a lovely sonnet. It was so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis P.S. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/5/2016 9:24:00 AM
A very lovely and well-written Sonnet, Frederic, full of the beauty of romantic love. Congrats on your poem being honored as Poem of the Day. 7 Sandra
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Date: 8/5/2016 9:22:00 AM
Frederic, this is BEAUTIFUL and a big congratulations on POTD and best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 8/5/2016 8:53:00 AM
You have penned another beautiful romantic sonnet Frederic you write this form so wonderfully:-) congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/5/2016 7:38:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet Frederick, congratulations on POTD honors...
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Date: 8/4/2016 2:27:00 PM
Salute, mate!
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Date: 8/3/2016 5:20:00 PM
Tenderly beautiful. I did not read bearing in mind all the contest particulars, just as me enjoying a sonnet and that I did - splended, Frederic ... CayCay
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:50:00 PM
Wonderful, Frederic. Gosh, this one is filling fast!! YIKES. I better get busy.
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:50:00 PM
love that ending couplet.
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Date: 8/3/2016 2:24:00 PM
now, you make me drool with this enticing, marvelous kind of lovin', frederick... simply fantastic!...huggs
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