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Love's Garden

my precious, my love when will we know that our love will continue forever? keep the seedbed moist sprout, take root, ready to grow … caring relationships thrive 10/22/2022 Poetry form: Sedoka - My Sedoka poem is one lover's sincere question, followed by the other lover's discerning answer. The Sedoka is a two-stanza poem, each stanza having three lines, with five syllables on the first line and seven syllables on the second and third lines.

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Date: 10/25/2022 4:12:00 AM
Good example of the Sedoka and explanation of how one is supposed to be written. I enjoyed reading it this morning. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/25/2022 9:20:00 AM
I'm very glad you enjoyed it, Sara. Thank you for your encouraging observations.