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Love's First Kiss

Our first kiss Was in the rain On that fateful day My life had changed Raindrops rolled Down your lovely cheeks You held a rose and smiled You were so sweet As I looked into your eyes Something exploded deep inside I felt your breath upon my face As our lips touched and embraced Two hearts sealed by a kiss First kiss I'll always miss On that rainy day in September Sun was shining from our lips

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 12/4/2017 7:15:00 PM

this moment, the eternal moment, beautiful write Arturo, great write.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/13/2017 10:24:00 AM

Hi Arturo!:)) Very beautiful and sweet poem, as always your poetry is!:) Write on and never stop writing dear friend:)All the best of everything to you too!:)Wishing you a very lovely week! In His Light God bless you always!:)) D.

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/13/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Dorian... for your beautiful words of encouragement

Maria Williams

Date: 11/9/2017 10:52:00 PM

You have captured the emotion of Love's first kiss so well Arturo. Love your last line. ..Maria

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/10/2017 5:03:00 AM

Bonjour Maria...Thanks for passing by...Lovely to see you...imagine those cracked lips with a burst of sunshine coming thru it... and fire likes fire...Have a nice day...

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/9/2017 10:13:00 PM

Arturo, a beautiful and romantic poem and your last line is so stunning and gorgeous, radiant in scintillating imagery my dear friend! Exquisite and enjoyed!!

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/10/2017 4:56:00 AM

Bonjour Susan... It's Friday... Thanks for your lovely comment... A big hug... and take care

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/9/2017 8:20:00 PM

Would this be considered a collaboration lol...nicely done Arturo...let me know if you need more ideas lol...god bless...^WW^

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/15/2017 5:10:00 AM

Where are you? Not seeing you around...Hope all is well...Send a smoke signal....

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/11/2017 3:59:00 AM

Yes Arturo...the last stanza is very well constructed ...which in turn brings in the rest if poem...you get a gold star my friend lol... next you can write about loves last kiss...I will always remember that...from my mom who passed away recently and also my ex wife many years ago...just suggestions...your writing style is second to none...be proud my friend...god bless...*WW*

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2017 9:04:00 PM

It's your title... the seed...Anytime you can wake me...please do... I want your opinion...Do you think the last stanza...can stand on its own...without the rest of the poem?

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2017 4:15:00 PM

Very romantic my friend..

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2017 7:27:00 PM

I'm trying...Thanks for passing by SO

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/9/2017 3:42:00 PM

Very sweet... :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2017 7:29:00 PM

Thank you Akkina...Nice to see you...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/9/2017 12:21:00 PM

Sweet poem Arturo!

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2017 12:40:00 PM

Thanks again Vijay... I think I need glasses... Seeing but not seeing...Nice day to you

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/9/2017 11:37:00 AM

Very nicely written Arturo!

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2017 11:44:00 AM

It's my last effort...WW... suggested this topic...So I tried my best...Going to focus on Video Poems for a while... Let's me see if I can turn a tide and change the course of my life...Thank you, Heidi... Such a pleasure to hear from you