Love's Fine Line

Like a rainbow bright and beautiful
Love flourished as a river flows to stream,
Forever faded fast to lies and loathe
Lowered the gauntlet on pure love of youth.

Magic dreams disintegrated into ash
Smouldering fire quenched as passion died,
The rainbow was eclipsed by selfish whims
This Romeo and Juliette expired.

Slowly through the years pendulum swayed
Inching closer to sever love in bloom,
Wilted romance now tasted only pain
The substitute to gather pieces lost.

In the beginning love carried a song
Sweet precious souls enwined in happiness,
Time is the culprit changing lovers tune
Embarking in passage of loneliness.

Love contains the key, the core to Life
Reaching several highs and many lows,
The gauntlet ever present to invade
Unless the lovers firmly stand, together grow.

For Mr. Heck's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 13, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Satin, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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May 12, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Satin, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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July 1, 2010 at 7:16 PM
Hi my friend.. sorry to hear u will not be returning .. hope u will check out your comments inbox to view the many nice comments u have received... I understand caring for your son comes first and foremost.. u have my phone numbers so call me .. I will be back from Hawaii by 2nd week in July .. found out today... have internet on my new cell phone so IM me.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. Ron sends luv too.. u and Stevie both..
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on yourwin in John Heck's contest "The Gauntlet" Satin. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 9:45 AM
I new this was going to win ;) I so enjoyed it! Light & Love
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June 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM
hey, havent' seen you in a while, a BIG congratulations to you for your fine win! LUv, Andrea
King Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:07 PM
congrats on the win!! This is a great poem
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:40 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in John's contest Satin. Love, Carol
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June 7, 2010 at 1:51 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Excellent poetry. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Richards Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 8:25 AM
What a wonderful, yet sad story of love that blooms, but withers with the passing of time...wow!!!! This is a terrific poem, and well deserving a win in John's contest!! Well done! Love, Carrie
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June 6, 2010 at 7:08 AM
A lovely metered poem. Congratulations on your top honors. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Congrats Satin Doll Diva on your 1st p0lace win in John's contest with this fantastic poem.. hope all will be well soon with Stevie and u will be able to return to our Family... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
K. Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Super congrats on winning first place with this eloquent & moving poem, Satin Doll--I can definitely see why it took top prize :)! --nikko:)
Fraser Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Satin, many congratulations on your wonderful poem winning John's fine contest, go girl >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family ...luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 4:44 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Satin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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May 23, 2010 at 5:37 PM
This is nice and enchanting. I love it. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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May 23, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Hey, Satin Doll, I bet john Heck will really like this one. He really likes free verse poetry and I wish you good luck with this sweet poem.LUv, andrea
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May 23, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Quite profound observations of young love, Satin Doll. If people do not "grow" together, the infatuation fades. Only with nourishment can love endure the test of time. Well done! John will like this one. Love, Carolyn
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