Love's Expression

Flowers fade Chocolate's consumed Love, once expressed so soon doomed

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/25/2024 8:14:00 PM

Sad, ate the chocolates, smelt the flowers and enjoyed them while they lasted. True love should be everlasting. This is the only thing that does (living in hopes!) Take care, Shirley

Michael Tor

Date: 2/24/2024 8:22:00 PM

A truthful analogy for some my friend. Love how you put those words in perspective to one another...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/24/2024 11:43:00 AM

Oh so sad! Replace those flowers and buy some chocolate. Speaking of chocolate…were we? Jacques Torres made the best hot chocolate I ever had (NYC)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/24/2024 1:09:00 AM

Good one Jerry but nice write Gershon Hugs.blessings, Jennifer.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/23/2024 5:58:00 PM

That's why a person should just eat the chocolates themselves and skip the heart break.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 1:45:00 PM

doomed? after chocolate? who would do such a thing :-)