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Love's Elixir

Into the horrid heat of my summer You fall as drops of rain, Nay, as drops of love’s elixir. The broken memories I treasure, Tumble and roll round like marbles. In this ravenous night As I sit outside all alone, Looking into the night sky I see blinking stars here and there, And my memories swim Around a starry-eyed girl My mind speeds like a steed to those days That had the beauty and brilliance, Of the arching rainbows of the blue And the glowing hues of peacock feathers You were then the rhyme and rhythm of my life. The song and melody of my spirit, The symphony in my violin, The alluring dream of my nights. Once you got into my garden unbidden Like a flitting butterfly, A leaping grasshopper, A honey sucking bee, A winging robin, When the breeze was hissing, When the flowers were nodding, And perched on my shoulder. I plucked for you a red, red rose, And you savored its fragrance. That very day you became my friend. You spread a pervading aroma, That wafted into me with every gushing wind. You became the throb of my life. My singular passion, A rising flame, My heart’s silent language, The sole focus of my life. But without even a parting word, You left me to my fate. Now I am pushed into a desolate isle, Where loneliness comes to strangle me, And I feel so defenseless! Here I struggle to elbow out, The train of wistful memories And at my feet lies the withered rose- The sad reminder of a passion we once shared! Now I know love hurts, it hurts terribly, Leaving one so utterly vanquished. Won’t you come once again? As my friend, nay as my soul mate My Valentine, to be together for ever And sit looking at each other from eye to eye! In anticipation, I wait here, For the falling echo, Of your jingling footsteps! Yes, I am in eternal wait! Jan. 27.2023 For Love’s Sake Poetry Contest Sponsor- Regina McIntosh

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Date: 1/29/2023 9:32:00 PM
the poetic verse and expression is just like the love elixir; great to read; congrats
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Date: 1/29/2023 2:47:00 AM
As usual, I'm inspired by your vision and poetry. love this so. God bless you and congrats, Love, Gina
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Date: 1/29/2023 5:54:00 AM
Thanks a lot Gina for the worthy placement. Thanks also for giving us this opportunity !
Date: 1/28/2023 7:51:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Very expressive and descriptive are the lines. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/27/2023 5:03:00 PM
Very beautiful, Valsa; love the many original poetic lines, "My mind speeds like a steed to those days That had the beauty and brilliance, Of the arching rainbows of the blue"; one can never say enough on the subject, so always room for another fine love poem. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 1/27/2023 11:30:00 AM
Valsa, you have such lovely metaphors. Your poetry is an excellent depiction of thoughts about love acquired and lost. I truly enjoyed the heartfelt notion you were attempting to express through your lovely love reflections. Wonderful choice of words.
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Date: 1/27/2023 11:13:00 AM
Beautifully ruminating of love--much enjoyed the romantic theme you convey, Valsa. Splendid vocabulary.
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:42:00 AM
Oh wow, this is one wondrous journey, Valsa. loved every stanza every line every word. Harry
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:23:00 AM
A brilliant exposition of memories of love won and lost. But hope still remains. Dear Valsa, what great imagery I read in your poem, especially the withered rose. You deserve a high rating. Hugs.
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Date: 1/27/2023 8:09:00 AM
Aww so beautiful and graceful, love it
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