L'Overture

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I dedicate this poem to FJ Thomas, someone who is an inspiration to me here!

L'Overture


Lest we forget
Words often mouthed
For the dead of bloody war
Forgot not those great ones
Whose battles were on the home front
Seeking only equality of voice

Ray Charles to you was a singer
Backwards and long ago he was a preacher
A brilliant man of forward thought
Who gifted the world with three wise women
The teacher
The poet
The Lawyer

Flo taught many with words
Long ago and yet here today
Those who teach both young and old
Hold the noblest of positions
Steering the generations
To a higher cause
With kindness, with heart
With head held up to the skies
Standing ground for those before
Abhorring those acting immature

1872 saw the first black lawyer
A sharp mind of determined heart
Argued to the Supremes
Beauty and brains
Leading the way towards freedom
For women of all races
For in 1872 she had the social graces

The revolution of sonnets
Black woman and prose
The poem and the black rose
In 1893 to be printed by a Little
Sure meant a lot
Henrietta fought the enemy
With languages and words
Her Wordsworth more than Haitian blood

The past, the present
Merging onto our futures dreams
Hope cares not the color, none at all
Hope comes from the rainbows
Where voices and angels whisper
When we part this early soil
Make us all into one

If I had a coloring book
In it I would put these three
Who colored the freedom of women
With education, articulation and harmony
The pen indeed defeated the sword
L'Overture gagne

* L'Overture gagne = The opening , won

In Actual fact the correct spelling of the French word, would be “L'Ouverture” So I was using a play on words with the Revolutionaries last name.

Notes: Not much of a poem, however this was inspired by an old photo I saw of Charlotte E. Ray. The first African American Lawyer in United States, and the first female lawyer in the district of Colombia. When I did some digging, I found she had also 2 sisters, one a poet, one a teacher. Their father was a preacher who firmly believed in education.

Her sister was one Henrietta Cordelia Ray, an American poet. Her poetry of  Sonnets was a short book of 12 sonnets on Milton, Shakespeare, Raphael, and Beethoven, among other subjects. Her sonnet on the Haitian revolutionary Toussaint L'Overture is notable for its belated engagement in black politics (absent from her earlier verse) and for its allusions to William Wordsworth's famous sonnet, "To Touissaint L'Overture”

Well now, the title makes more sense, n’est pas? However the last name also means in English “The Opening” and I thought how fitting that in the late 1800’s black women were beginning to open doors to the future. 

Also now the line “Her Wordsworth more than Haitian blood” should be self explanatory and no wordsworth was not a typo! (even I am famous for them)

Now another of my passions, is French poetry, history and culture, and yes Touissaint L'Overture stood up to Napoleon and although historically he lost, and was deported to France where he died, I think its safe to say that “L'Overture gagne” meaning he won, in that he too was the “Opening” for the changes that would come later. In fact its there is some irony that all the revolution for change is often lost in the short term, when education and the pen make gains that are very hard to revere.

Ray Charles to you was a singer
Backwards and long ago he was a preacher

This of course means if you take Ray Charles the singer’s name that I am sure most know and reverse the name, you get the name Charles Ray, the father of the three women.

Argued to the Supremes

Again, Charlotte E. Ray the lawyer did argue in the Supreme Court and so the play on words with “the Supremes” and one could infer many meanings in this line.

Now the third sister was a teacher and I haven’t found out much about her, her name was Florence and Flo for short, and as I jumped periods with Ray Charles and Charles Ray, when I was reading about these strong women, and one must remember the time at which they made their accomplishments was not as today, it made me thing of another Flo, and therefore, I intermixed by thoughts of her with that of which I imagined the teacher would be.

Little, refers to the publishing company who published Henrietta’s sonnets

Not all poems are meant to be great, some are just stories, and I love adding double meanings and innuendo, because when engaging people in discussion, there is nothing that better than relating events and people they may know with those of the past they may not. As sometimes with students, we discuss poems at a local coffee shop, this type of poem makes for great discussions.

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Date: 4/27/2018 9:33:00 PM
Be still my heart ... again. I've had a very bad day and I needed to find this. Thank you Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/28/2018 2:41:00 AM
Nothing can make anyone happier than hearing your words, to think I helped in any small way, someone as you, is a warming thought! Hugs
Date: 4/16/2016 9:49:00 AM
Arthur, nice tribute and so informative, I am loving this 7 ~
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:10:00 PM
You are so sweet! We should go to McDonald's!!!! ( there is a story behind that)
Date: 4/10/2016 5:51:00 PM
You share your brilliant mind in this fascinating piece Arthur. You play with words superbly my friend. I enjoyed your background information as much as your poem, because it enriched it so. A fantastic poem you have created Arthur! #7 : )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, I really think its the story itself that shines!
Date: 4/10/2016 5:28:00 PM
WOW....a fantastic poem with so much historical significance. Love it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/10/2016 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Tim was actually just fixing a few typos and errors! :)
Date: 4/10/2016 5:24:00 PM
First off I love that look on a woman...very beautiful...now I have to read it....might take a while lol
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:44:00 PM
Looking the photo or reading the poem? Yes I was captivated by the photo, and then even more so with the history!
Date: 4/10/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this gem, it is excellently written and eloquent.....bless.......A.M.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/10/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Afolabi!
Date: 4/10/2016 2:30:00 AM
What a descriptive informative poem Arthur and I agree with everything Keith has said - as for FJ - she is inspirational not only with her writing but her generosity to many here - she really is an angel ... Yesterday I wrote a poem called poetry soup angels dedicated to wonderful people like Flo:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:42:00 PM
FJ was one of the first I met here, a very kind intelligent articulate beautiful woman! :)
Date: 4/9/2016 11:51:00 PM
What an outstanding piece this is... your explanatory notes are almost as fascinating as the piece you have written here. Absorbing in so many ways. Your friend, Keith
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thanks Keith, I know the poem wasn't that great, I just thought the story behind was! Cheers!
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