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Lover's Joy

in a hotel room i free both my heart and past inhibitions lost. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/20/2013 9:51:00 AM

an original and succinct take on the theme, leaves the reader with a few questions which is never a bad thing, congrats on your win! :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 2/20/2013 8:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win Harry! :D - hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2013 1:36:00 AM

Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2013 8:40:00 PM

So glad to see it on the list!!! Congrats, my friend!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/19/2013 5:12:00 PM

If only walls could talk. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/19/2013 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Harry! Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2013 4:16:00 PM

Miss you already Harry, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2013 12:42:00 PM

congrats on your win Harry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/19/2013 8:10:00 AM

Big congratulations harry, love this one xx

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/19/2013 7:42:00 AM

Harry congrats on your win. A great Senryu. Warm Smiles, Connie

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 2/8/2013 7:37:00 PM

Lovely versing...Freedom brings on a spoem for sure. Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2013 6:40:00 PM

speaking of this hotel room, this is what I had in mind with my beach poem, NOT a tent. hahaha

Heather Ober

Date: 2/7/2013 12:15:00 PM

WOW. This is wonderful! I agree with the rest of the comments. You seem to be quite the master of Senryu. Great job! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/7/2013 5:34:00 AM

hi soup mail

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 2/7/2013 2:29:00 AM

Oh wow, this is awesome!!! Excellent imagery!!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/6/2013 9:10:00 PM

You've written a story in three short lines, Harry! Great job! Always, Annalise P.S. This must be for the contest...my best wishes for the Winners' Circle.