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Arms entwined Mouths touching Hands dancing In a beautiful ballet Eyes locked Breaths mingling Hearts galloping Senseless to the rest Two lovers Intertwined Passion flowing In their love nest Nothing matters They love each other Their love is strong They'll make it last... *** November 13, 2016 10th place in the Premiere Contest 265 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/22/2017 3:18:00 PM
HOT!! Congratulations Claudia.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/22/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Jean!!! :)
Date: 1/22/2017 12:50:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. You can feel the images in the writing.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/22/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot Janis.. I'm happy you liked it :)
Date: 1/22/2017 8:19:00 AM
Like looking at a beautiful painting! Congrats, Claudia!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/22/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank You Kim for your kind comment :) :*
Date: 1/22/2017 7:50:00 AM
WoW Clau, you're on a roll girl <3 CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/22/2017 8:31:00 AM
Yayyyyyyy... so happy!!! Thanks my sweet friend :)
Date: 11/30/2016 6:02:00 PM
Sounds good I imagine this to be almost a dance between lovers...A salsa..
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/30/2016 7:29:00 PM
:) Thanks Keith... It is a kind of dance - the most sensual one ;)
Date: 11/30/2016 6:41:00 AM
Such beautifully expressed feelings and emotion. Love is just like that.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/30/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Chris :) I think so too
Date: 11/30/2016 5:11:00 AM
Ohhh, that's how I picture myself, that's how it's supposed to be :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/30/2016 7:14:00 AM
***sighs... right?*** :) :*

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