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Busy day, heavy gray clouds Hang low, moisture laden Ready at a heartbeat to empty It's cold, wet load weighted and Raindrops start falling, heavy and free Those drops fall and run fast Upon saturated earth's red Clay, wondering if it has passed? No, it hasn't passed, charcoal clouds hang Waiting to pour 'pon earth again Will the earth be loaded at the first freeze A deep-freeze winter reign? Will the tears become frozen As weeping of praying Christians long for a return to Righteousness and for its staying ? The rain flows, pours once more wetting rain Because it bounces 'pon streams Runs over puddles, leaves, and rocks Every inch is soaked so it seems Wet pages upon the Bible Underlined in colors Tear soaked looking for answers but____ When did man become their own lovers?

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/9/2021 10:49:00 AM

We each of us on this Earth, have to realize our relationship with God, it is a very precious relationship which only becomes apparent and understandable, when we open our souls to Him. Hugs and blessings Sara, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2021 3:47:00 PM

Jennifer, So many don't want to hear about it. Sad isn't it? Your presence at my page was encouraging. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2021 10:29:00 AM

Catching the mood I sense about the world and how it's all turning out. Great stuff, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2021 3:43:00 PM

Andrea, Yes, the end is coming but we don't know when. I fear that it is going to get worse. Thank you for stopping by. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/8/2021 5:17:00 AM

WoW! Sara, You have composed such a well-written verse. I echo what Victor said. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2021 3:25:00 PM

Alexis, I think Victor made a valid point. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 10/7/2021 12:46:00 AM

Twas ever thus Sara,ego the original sin

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/7/2021 4:33:00 AM

Brian, Man thought he could make it on his own. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/6/2021 2:57:00 PM

A very well-crafted poem, Sara, and due to our society's inherent greed and evil, many individuals have chosen to reject God, only to find that it is too late.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/7/2021 4:30:00 AM

Lasaad, I would not want to know the number. Once I had a dream and in it thousands of people were walking like in movies when people get off a subway and the part of about it was in even my dream I knew these people were lost with God or His Son. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/6/2021 1:50:00 PM

Too much greed and evil in our world Sara, many have turned their backs on God, when they realise it will be too late. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 2:32:00 PM

Good question, Tom. When? Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2021 10:19:00 AM

Perfect question at the end. We are all egoistic and forget the help we can get from above.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 1:33:00 PM

Victor, We have to have some self esteem and care for ourselves to survive but when did it get so bad that humankind get so wrapped up in themselves. Sara