Loverick

In a land of dreams and wishes I come to steal your kisses Make you smile Stay for awhile One day you'll be my Mrs

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Date: 11/3/2015 12:39:00 PM

Wow a new poetry form lovericks! Cool!

Date: 11/1/2015 4:06:00 PM

This is even sweeter. love it!

Date: 11/1/2015 1:54:00 PM

- A sweet one, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 10/31/2015 11:45:00 AM

Aww...cute lim! Enjoyed this a lot, Tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2015 11:47:00 AM

Thank Kim. Enjoy your weekend.

Date: 10/31/2015 9:17:00 AM

It's raining here too!

Date: 10/31/2015 8:41:00 AM

Cute! This is sweet and fun Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Richard. Hoping the rain stops in time for the trick or treaters this afternoon

Date: 10/31/2015 8:10:00 AM

Tim, I enjoyed this loverick. This is such a beautiful dream:-)Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2015 8:11:00 AM

Thanks Alexis. Hope all our dreams come true.

Date: 10/31/2015 7:50:00 AM

This made me think of a movie called 'The wedding planner ' . Sweet loverick :.)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2015 7:54:00 AM

I love that movie. Happy Halloween : )

Date: 10/31/2015 7:46:00 AM

Real wedding plans in your future, Tim? This is a lovely limerick.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thanks Lin....no wedding plans...just dreams

Date: 10/31/2015 7:42:00 AM

Awww... didn't know you cared dear Timmy! xxxxxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2015 7:44:00 AM

I have always cared Jack....thanks for inspiring a new genre of limericks