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Lovely Frangipani Petals

It was in the beautifully majestic Florida Keys Where I visited with my beloved grand-mother She introduced me to the frangipani with its luscious clusters The fragrance was bewitchingly inebriating Soon I couldn’t distinguish the petals from the butterflies Twilight had gradually descended without a sound Till the mockingbirds bellowed their glorious chants Amidst the enchantment of an ancestral menagerie Like royalty, we slowly sipped from delicate pellucid crystal glasses Vermilion and gold had infused the ripples of the ocean before us AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted for contest TEN WORDS AND TEN LINES CHALLENGE sponsored by SILENT ONE - January 6, 2018 - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 1/12/2018 7:39:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Line for your wonderful win with your enchanting and luscious write. Beautiful! ~Susan
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:23:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Very appreciated. Best wishes.
Date: 1/12/2018 8:51:00 AM
Lovely work Line, congratulations...
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Date: 1/12/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/12/2018 7:13:00 AM
Enchanting use of the words. Line: Congratulations on your high placement. Best, SuZ
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/12/2018 6:03:00 AM
Congrats Line much enjoyed :)
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/12/2018 1:36:00 AM
Line, you've describe the Keys well. It's been a while since I've visited.
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, James. Much appreciate your visit.
Date: 1/11/2018 8:05:00 PM
Very enjoyable read, Line, and congrats on your placement in the contest. :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Carole. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Line
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Date: 1/11/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:33:00 PM
What a beautiful use of the words Line!! Enjoyed this very much! Congratulations!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/11/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, Judith. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2018 4:27:00 PM
Hi Line, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write :-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2018 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2018 2:43:00 PM
Some great lines in this great poem... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, SO. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/7/2018 8:37:00 PM
Beautiful and luscious imagery infuses your enchanting write Line. You have woven the required words into your lovely poem with ease. I enjoyed the trip to the Florida Keys, my friend :) Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes from me to you! ~Susan
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Date: 1/7/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/7/2018 4:57:00 PM
Hi Line, You did a fine job with the chosen words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/7/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/6/2018 8:50:00 PM
Very well written Line. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 1/6/2018 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/6/2018 8:03:00 PM
Beautifully penned Line...
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Date: 1/6/2018 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Much appreciated.

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