Loveless-Painless

Lights came on; dreams started to roam. Floating along beside an unknown gnome. Miserable heartaches shed. Hurtful imaginings fled, She woke up while her body stayed home. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 11, 2010 Poetic form: Rhyme

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John Loving Iii

Date: 6/18/2010 1:44:00 PM

i picture the part of the story your in but what about the gnome what did he wake up next to? jhl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2010 10:13:00 AM

Such is the nature of nightmares, Dane Ann. I'm glad the "unknown gnome" was able to bring her peace. Great poem, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/13/2010 11:12:00 AM

awwww Dane I loved this one smile love Jayne

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/12/2010 10:48:00 AM

Hi Dane-Ann, I do hope that this was not real!!! Didn't hear a while from you and hope you are ok..Have a nice weekend...Gert