Lovebugs Copulate

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lovebugs copulate everywhere in just mid-air.. splat another death

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Ralph Mason

Date: 9/19/2012 2:02:00 PM

Yes very dangerous affair! Thanks for your comment Sara. warm thoughts, Ralph

Karen Croft

Date: 9/19/2012 11:04:00 AM

reminds me of driving through ocala florida!! thanks for hosting a great contest and for my placement

Jack Horne

Date: 9/19/2012 10:41:00 AM

very clever haiku, Sara. lol, what a surprise last line - I wasn't expecting that : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2012 8:41:00 AM

what a wonderful element of surprise, sara... you expressed this so nonchalantly but with flair!.. :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 7:20:00 AM

oh my, you are becoming a master at the twists of haiku. Loved that final line!!! Poor lady bugs. They are my favorite of insects, and the firefly too.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/18/2012 5:13:00 PM

Made me laugh! Funny one....BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/18/2012 3:50:00 PM

Ha ha ha, this one cracks me up my friend! I really enjoyed the fascinating poem, such a well crafted Haiku Sara! The last line is ingenious, simply perfect! I love this poem, Great Work!!