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July 22, 2023
Placed 1st: Choose A Line II Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May


 

Love Weaves a Magic Spell

Blooming avid hearts, where reveries dwell,
“Love weaves a mysterious magic spell”
Turning daydreams into amorous fairytale
Of endeavors esoteric smitten passions unveil,

Sketching emotions, fantasies ecstatic ignite,
Threading themes, musings-intimate write,
Embroidering bliss upon tapestries of mind,
Bedecking realm heavenly, destiny designed,

Rejoicing springs roaming on fragrant breeze,
Sailing blue seas, summer’s aspirations seize,
Exultant in notions of love, autumn weaves,
Choreographing dance of falling gold-leaves,

Luring besotted eyes fixating on moonlit skies, 
Vying impulses-romantic, fervid moods surmise,
Rhapsodic in elation, aglow in stellar delight,
Hypnotizing minds caressing proffers of night,

“Love weaves a mysterious magic spell”
Blooming avid hearts, where reveries dwell,
Culminating in sweet rendezvous desires plea
Threading intimate fantasies for you and me.
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Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Belated congrats on your magical poem!
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Threading intimate fantasies, choreographing dancing leaves, and embroidering bliss, how stunning and soulful is your way with expressing and the way you paint imagery is beyond impeccable. Every poem i read by you is so profound, with sublime rhymes and descriptive diction, and this one comes with such heartfelt emotions too; loved reading this. As always.
Downing  Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Mighty romantic masterpiece, my friend! You sure are the weaver of magic love and romance :) I love it!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a great day with your win............
May Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay, Very nicely penned
Ball Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 2:49 AM
Yes indeed. Love weaves a magic spell. Beautifully written and so very well expressed once more you have drawn me into your words. Love it. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB
Proxenos Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Love weaves a mysterious magic spell, especially when Vijay Pandit writes his spellbound poetry and always manages to catch and rivet my undivided attention to his detailed talent. Bravo Vijay. hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Tor Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Such emotional words shared and capturing love Vijay. Your unique ability to invent phrases that really capture the essence of love is to be impressed upon. You have a wonderful creative mind that is unique in fortelling of topics and themes. Another favorite Vijay you always deliver my friend. Blessings your way...
DiMino Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:29 PM
"Exultant in notions of love, autumn weaves, Choreographing dance of falling gold-leaves" -- divine writing. No greater muse than Love itself.
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 2:01 AM
A masterpiece of romantic dream come true, Vijay, should do well in the contest:)
M  Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:32 PM
“The master of love poems “ you are Vijay! What more can l say…you just keep writing the most beautiful captivating poems about love! Always Debx
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Dearest Vijay, you continue to exude an unparalleled talent for capturing the essence of love. Your skill in crafting phrases is truly remarkable. Your words are a tapestry of beauty and grace, adorned with eloquent imagery and masterful descriptions. Good luck with the contest.
George Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Indeed love weaves a magic spell ! Each time you handle the subject of love, you are weaving a magic spell on us. Lovely as ever and you remain the unchallenged bard of love! All the Best !
Rose  Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 6:27 PM
you have indeed weaved a lovely spell on me, Vijay, thanks for sharing this, I for-see a winner here
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:25 AM
A good way to start the day --reading your kind remarks. Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Vienna. Many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Beautifully romantic! Holds us in its spell! Nice one, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Much appreciate your thoughts my friend. Many thanks, Kim.
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 2:23 AM
Creative lines penned about the effects of newfound love that sometimes only happens once in a lifetime. Everything around seems more vivid and exciting when one falls in love. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Love has that magic! I am honored by your kind insights, Sara. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Ball Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:31 PM
You really know how to turn a phrase my friend. Beautifully worded and well expressed. Lovely. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:22 AM
That is so nice to hear from you, Judy. Your kind thoughts are much appreciated and valued. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:18 PM
"Sketching emotions upon tapestries of mind, threading intimate fantasies." So beautiful, tender and romantic, this moment you express. "Love weaves a magical spell," indeed. Your words leave me breathless, my dear friend. I'm curling this softly around me. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Brandy. Always a joy to read your thoughts my dear friend. Many thanks for being there, always. Hugs to you!
Canerdy Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 5:27 PM
Vividly descriptive and so romantic, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:19 AM
So glad to hear that from you, Janice. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Baker Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Imagery and descriptions were, eloquent in this one Vijay. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Much appreciate your insights, Bill. Many thanks, my friend.
Situation Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 3:21 PM
This piece is full of ingredience. But the good stuff.
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Hope you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 11:05 AM
A captivating poem, replete with charming images. :)
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:17 AM
So very kind of you Evelyn. Always appreciate your thoughtful feedback. Many thanks.
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