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Love Untethered

Adeleke Adeite asks for amour,
Portions of love in a plentiful pour. 
Sharing sweet sighs
And Heavenly highs, 
Fabulous fantasies forevermore.




"Unspeakable Love Contest

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Constance La France

February 18, 2011 at 6:24 AM

Just so lovely, I am sure Adeleke will adore this one, dear heart~~

George Aul

February 17, 2011 at 3:19 PM

A very nice write for the contest...Thanks........ George

Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2011 at 1:37 PM

Great one..The Alliteration is great..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck..Thanks for the visit to my blog...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 16, 2011 at 4:00 PM

thanks for the quick congrats. I just barely learned that contest was judged! I think THIS one is gonna rate high. Your entry is so pretty. My limerick is not lovely at all!!

Nette Onclaud

February 16, 2011 at 5:15 AM

a double treat, joyce.. you come up with very incredible pieces.... love it! best of luck in the contest though i don't think you need it! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2011 at 10:15 PM

ps. yes, oldest crime was for the non rhyming contest. Most of my non rhymes are either prose, etheree or haiku!

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2011 at 6:10 PM

Hey you combined alliteration AND limerick. I will have to reread the rules. I thought he said one or the other, but this double Licious THIS way, Joyce!