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Love Unfolds

We dance in the autumn color Splashed to decorate the dance floor Your love always makes my heart stir Living dreams, I always want more You hand the brightest leaf to me I hold it as it flaps in the breeze Then, I get down onto my knees I vow, to always love you true with ease You take my hand to gently hold We are two but one with each step Through the seasons, our love unfolds To be shared in the memory kept Heidi Sands 9/21/17

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/21/2017 7:28:00 PM

Well done, Heidi, I am not to romantic on my poems so I don't well with them. good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Eve :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/21/2017 4:33:00 PM

Very romantic write...enjoyed

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 4:40:00 PM

I just edited it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Joseph. I just realized I left out the part about being handed a leaf! lol. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/21/2017 3:52:00 PM

As you know already, I love the Fall, so this Autumnal delight has certainly made my heart sing with pure joy my friend! I really enjoyed reading this sincere and fantastic poem this afternoon! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 4:00:00 PM

Hi Russell. I am so happy you enjoyed this poem!! Thank you for your kind comment on this :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2017 2:16:00 PM

A sincere song of love--urging an emotional response and autumn romance--best wishes for a top win Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/21/2017 1:15:00 PM

Lovely! :) enjoyed, best to you in the contest! xomo

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 2:53:00 PM

Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/21/2017 1:04:00 PM

- Amor's arrows are in the air, Heidi :) - Lovely romance - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 2:53:00 PM

Thank you so much :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/21/2017 12:31:00 PM

ironic...love unfolds in Autumn as the leaves are folding up...good luck in the contest...Autumn or Spring which one has more romance?

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 12:34:00 PM

Hi Frederic. You are right and it is hard to say which season has more romance :) Thank you for your comment on this.