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Love Triangle - End Line Contest

We are so different you and ................ I 
I couldn’t behave like you have............. NEVER
You are so self centered...I want, I........ WANT
Guess we need to stop all forms of.........CONTACT
She’s the one you really want to be ........WITH
You don’t care about me, it’s all about......YOU
Don’t cross my path ever ......................AGAIN


End Line Word – Sponsor -HGarvey Daniel Esquire
08~04~15

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James Fraser October 10, 2015 at 1:52 PM A picture of life painted by your words Jan, nice//James xx Jan Allison October 10, 2015 at 2:23 PM I enjoyed the challenge here James its a form I've never tried before:-)hugs Jan xx

Boygene Rabura October 9, 2015 at 3:30 AM this is awesome. i feel it,some emotions attached to it. pleasure to read your script. Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 4:45 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Boygene:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman August 6, 2015 at 11:37 AM Jan, you commented on my End Line and said you were struggling with yours. It was well worth the effort. I love it. Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 11:51 AM Thanks James - yours is far superior in my estimation:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus August 6, 2015 at 4:29 AM Short, but quite a slammer, Jan!! Looks like it's the end of this love triangle! Hugs // paul .... [ps~great news about Darren!] Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 5:36 AM Thanks Paul - I have been on cloud 9 since i heard from him - best news this year:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Breidenthal August 5, 2015 at 11:30 PM Hard hitting, and yes, a winner indeed. Very nicely done Jan! Always, Laura Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 12:01 AM Thanks Laura - please send my regards to David please I have not seem him around recently:-) hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri August 5, 2015 at 4:01 PM This. Is. A. Winner!!! I . Love:-) Jan Allison August 5, 2015 at 4:02 PM Thanks so much Njeri - have never tried this form before it was a great challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet August 5, 2015 at 2:48 PM A well structured poem that flows with strong emotional currents. Well written. Emile. Jan Allison August 5, 2015 at 3:21 PM Thanks so much Emile :-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez August 5, 2015 at 7:16 AM I'm back. Had to talk to someone earlier. And again, this too is one for the wins... I checked the requirement and you'de done it with strong voice! Loved how you did it! hugs! Jan Allison August 5, 2015 at 3:19 PM Blog has gone up on the interview and another one about my news finally heard from my writing partner Darren after a 9 month silence- am simply bursting with happiness:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison August 5, 2015 at 8:06 AM Thanks Kim - have just had AMAZING news am shaking here will do a blog when I have calmed down! Hugs jan xx Just waiting for the interview to go on the radio now:-)

Constance La France August 5, 2015 at 6:59 AM Jan, you did this so well 7 and thanks for visiting my sunset poem, wow poem of the day! Jan Allison August 5, 2015 at 7:00 AM Thanks for dropping by and congrats again:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie August 4, 2015 at 8:20 PM Unusual write Jan, but the message is loud and clear - good luck - Lindsay Jan Allison August 5, 2015 at 2:36 AM Thanks Lindsay I have to go with my muse lol:-) hugs jan xx

Daver Austin August 4, 2015 at 4:25 PM Hey! Squash that mamma! This does double duty to some very bad dude, eh. Love, daver Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 4:35 PM Thanks Daver:-)thankfully it is just written for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Nathan D. August 4, 2015 at 3:28 PM Jan, sad in every way. I would definitely love to see this one score high in Harvey's contest. Love Nate Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 3:33 PM Thanks Nathan - it is my first attempt at the form and first time I have entered one of Harvey's contests so i have my wings crossed he likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie August 4, 2015 at 11:02 AM this write is a thing of Beauty....two in one, your words on double duty....such emotion inspires the best in me....and in this selection, you did so effortlessly....;) Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 11:11 AM Thank you for such a lovely comment Eric:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian August 4, 2015 at 10:29 AM You rock, girl. Intriguing write. I like it....very much. Hugs Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 10:56 AM Thanks Eileen :-) I may play with the second line a little but overall am happy with the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Anna Hopper August 4, 2015 at 9:23 AM Nice job! Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 9:46 AM thanks Anna:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2015 at 8:44 AM Jan, I like how you did your entry. I gotta get busy on one soon!! The only end line that seemed a bit strange to me was line 2's. Maybe because you were using that expression. "WEll, I Never!!" ? You are flying high in the poetry sky, my friend. So many poems!!! Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 9:45 AM Thanks Andrea - I may revamp line 2 trying to say I would never behave like them - Never ....Only one poem a day unless a contest is closing:-) still working on Nette's:-) hugs Jan xx