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Love Through the Ages

A bliss so old, yet void of functional losses seemingly very simple- making them a divine binary exhibiting commitment cutely disciplined, fashioned and pure superseding the training of a hundred seminaries Just holding hands and perfume’s scent bring back memories and give a fresh experience oldskool tease and creative naughtiness generate uniquely a specific ambience Periods had gone, stages were set yet getting stronger, phase after phase despite all extremities and pressures boldly faced the bond enjoys water, making the union such an unbreakable vase love through the ages, strengthened by a thousand cords powerful and exemplary, only death can be its landless lord

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/25/2015 11:48:00 AM
I think true love can live on, even after death... This is such a powerful and passionate write. Amazing work, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2015 9:59:00 AM
Thank you very much.... Yeah! true love can live on even after death
Date: 4/15/2015 2:28:00 AM
Very involving poem. I experience similar thoughts through time and age. Nice to meet you
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Date: 4/17/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Mario DE PAZ
Date: 4/14/2015 2:52:00 PM
Love through the ages, strengthened by a thousand cords is my favorite line...Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2015 11:31:00 AM
thank you so much sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2015 1:09:00 AM
Real love is so elusive, yet so miraculous, when finally found. I don't think that death can ever destroy it. A wonderful poem, Funom.
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Date: 4/13/2015 12:45:00 PM
hmmm.. your interesting opinion should be a topic for another day, but thanks a lot for giving me something to ponder upon.. I really appreciate all your follow ups to my poems...
Date: 4/4/2015 8:59:00 AM
Powerful flow and playful language choices. This resonates for me, as is not often the case. In the next to last line, did you intend "strengthened"? And, the last phrase, for me is nuanced as "death can only be its landless lord", but I find it fascinating the way you have it. Absence as "lord", like the top of a reversed hierarchy.
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Date: 4/13/2015 12:40:00 PM
Your corrections are epic, needed and brotherly... I appreciate your observations and with no further ado, make the needed corrections

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