Funom Makama Poet Romanticism

Love Through the Ages

A bliss so old, yet void of functional losses
seemingly very simple- making them a divine binary
exhibiting commitment cutely disciplined, fashioned and pure
superseding the training of a hundred seminaries

Just holding hands and perfume’s scent
bring back memories and give a fresh experience
oldskool tease and creative naughtiness
generate uniquely a specific ambience

Periods had gone, stages were set
yet getting stronger, phase after phase
despite all extremities and pressures boldly faced
the bond enjoys water, making the union such an unbreakable vase
love through the ages, strengthened by a thousand cords
powerful and exemplary, only death can be its landless lord

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Kelly Deschler April 25, 2015 at 11:48 AM I think true love can live on, even after death... This is such a powerful and passionate write. Amazing work, Funom! Funom Makama April 26, 2015 at 9:59 AM Thank you very much.... Yeah! true love can live on even after death

Mario De Paz April 15, 2015 at 2:28 AM Very involving poem. I experience similar thoughts through time and age. Nice to meet you Funom Makama April 17, 2015 at 11:33 AM Thank you so much Mario DE PAZ

Sara Kendrick April 14, 2015 at 2:52 PM Love through the ages, strengthened by a thousand cords is my favorite line...Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Funom Makama April 17, 2015 at 11:31 AM thank you so much sara Kendrick

M. L. Kiser April 8, 2015 at 1:09 AM Real love is so elusive, yet so miraculous, when finally found. I don't think that death can ever destroy it. A wonderful poem, Funom. Funom Makama April 13, 2015 at 12:45 PM hmmm.. your interesting opinion should be a topic for another day, but thanks a lot for giving me something to ponder upon.. I really appreciate all your follow ups to my poems...

Rev. Gerald Dillenbeck April 4, 2015 at 8:59 AM Powerful flow and playful language choices. This resonates for me, as is not often the case. In the next to last line, did you intend "strengthened"? And, the last phrase, for me is nuanced as "death can only be its landless lord", but I find it fascinating the way you have it. Absence as "lord", like the top of a reversed hierarchy. Funom Makama April 13, 2015 at 12:40 PM Your corrections are epic, needed and brotherly... I appreciate your observations and with no further ado, make the needed corrections