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Love Story Gone Wrong

Tears fall… Eyes can’t seem to focus. You say you want something…. I thought it was love. I believed it… So I gave you what you asked for. Savagely, with eyes full of hunger you took it. Just like the rest of them. You didn’t even care… You let yourself inside me. Now I’m your drug. You’re addicted to something I wish I could stop. But you won’t let me. I thought it was love… Turns out it was just a joke. That’s all it could ever be now. People tell me they make love. All I’m thinking is… Love can’t be made, Only faked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2016 1:38:00 AM
SUSANA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:09:00 AM
Susana COnde, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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Date: 9/12/2009 9:57:00 AM
Hey Susana, this is a very passionate piece, I can feel your pain and the grief. Well, love making is a wrong perception, God is love and you can’t make God, love is best shared and it should not be mistaken for SEX. Getting addicted sometimes is a matter of choice. Seek God’s help, you can reach me via soupmail so we can talk better. Please keep writing, you are great! Welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/10/2009 3:58:00 AM
I would like to welcome you and your poetry to PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors Susana. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 2:28:00 AM
love hides in take abides in give wisdom proves all things with time. as love proves the heart and loneliness is the liars friend....o
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