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Love Stands

"love stands" blinded by lights I couldn't see deafened by noise I didn't hear lights and sounds altered the course with clocks ticking we never whispered only to be two who rode with wind one fine day the changing weave turned the path of love has forever changed helping me see through blinding lights making me hear through blazing chatter my world has opened beyond the rainbow magically I hear and suddenly I see from the wondrous grace heaven above with this invitation take now my hand you have me evermore to have and hold this moment my promise of love stands through it all glad am I for our journey defining sweetly friendship courtship love SkyWatcher 03-04-23

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Date: 3/14/2023 8:50:00 PM
Oh how tenderly sweet is this. “You have me evermore to have and to hold.” I love it. :)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/15/2023 2:55:00 AM
Good Morning Fin. Hello. Never do I take reviews or comments for granted. Thank you very much for such a beautiful graceful and generous review. Truly. Words do not express my appreciation. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup also. (smile)
Date: 3/5/2023 11:03:00 AM
You've expressed the experience of falling and being in Love in a truly romantic way, Lisa. Write on! my inspiring friend. Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you Bill. Please excuse this short response and reply. I will see you on your page very soon. Blessings always.
Date: 3/4/2023 11:51:00 AM
Quite a romantic poem.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:39:00 AM
Hello once again Victor. Once again please excuse my short response and reply. Love and Blessings always.

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