Love Stands

"love stands"

blinded by lights I couldn't see
deafened by noise I didn't hear
lights and sounds altered the course
with clocks ticking we never whispered
only to be two who rode with wind

one fine day the changing weave turned
the path of love has forever changed
helping me see through blinding lights
making me hear through blazing chatter
my world has opened beyond the rainbow

magically I hear and suddenly I see
from the wondrous grace heaven above
with this invitation take now my hand
you have me evermore to have and hold
this moment my promise of love stands

through it all glad am I for our journey
defining sweetly friendship courtship love

SkyWatcher
03-04-23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chuuk Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 8:50 PM
Oh how tenderly sweet is this. “You have me evermore to have and to hold.” I love it. :)
Ricci Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Good Morning Fin. Hello. Never do I take reviews or comments for granted. Thank you very much for such a beautiful graceful and generous review. Truly. Words do not express my appreciation. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup also. (smile)
Baker Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 11:03 AM
You've expressed the experience of falling and being in Love in a truly romantic way, Lisa. Write on! my inspiring friend. Bill
Ricci Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you Bill. Please excuse this short response and reply. I will see you on your page very soon. Blessings always.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Quite a romantic poem.
Ricci Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Hello once again Victor. Once again please excuse my short response and reply. Love and Blessings always.
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