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Love Sleeps, Never Dies

An old man
A Grumpy bitter old man
Bitter face
Red nose
Wrinkled beady eyes
Scruffy clothes his best attire

Life has not been kind
So his bitter words bite those around
He lived alone, inside his madness
Leave me be and go to hell
His favorite expressions

The phone rang one night late
This is the Court sir, your brother’s son and family 
Have been in a terrible accident
Only your niece of four survived
When can you pick her up?

The old man was in a daze
What the hell was he being punished for now
Keeping care of a dam kid
What the bloody hell did he know about that?
"Well sir, we will be expecting you tomorrow, 9am prompt please"

Walking back to his flat, with a 4 year old girl in tow
Well the neighbors gawked to say the least
The poor little girl, tears and teddy, trying to keep up with grumpy
Once inside his flat, he looked at her with disdain
Said "Guess you be expecting some food or some such"

She nodded, as sad as she was, she was indeed hungry
He showed her the cupboard and fridge, milk and cereal in there
Help yourself, and wash the dam dishes afterwards
Don’t got no extra bed, so you sleep here on the couch
She nodded silently, thinking the world truly must have ended

Days, turned into weeks, turned into months
This little girl complained not once
All she could think of was her pain
Mummy and daddy were in heaven where ever that was
Why they left her was truly confusing

Friday was her birthday
She was sad and missing her family
Getting ready, she went to the cupboard for dinner
The old man said what the hell you doing that for?
She shivered in fear, he was always so so so mad

She apologies, sorry uncle Pete
He replied you sit your self down right there
And you be quiet you here?
Then the lights all of sudden went out
Bright tiny candles burned in the night

The old man, said, is your birthday after all
Hope you don’t mind these little cupcakes I got us here
She looked at him with new eyes
He turned, not quite smiling, no miracles just yet
They ate in silence after which, he said good night and happy birthday

The next morning even they really never talked
Other than who does what chores
Or how expensive she was to care for
She asked out of the blue
"Uncle, why do angels have wings?"

In his usual grumpy way, he replied
"So they get the hell away from us as fast as they can is why
This world is no place for happiness or angels get used to that"
She was taken back by his bitterness, still………
She replied, “but I dream on them looking over me uncle"

Well he looked at her, and somewhat softly and with unusual kindness
He answered her "that’s because you are one of them, a sweet little angel"
She ran into his arms and gave him a big hug
This was a very good thing.
For then she could not see the single tear the dropped to the floor

He actually hugged her back and with all of his heart
That day, a day for most people that was a normal day
Was for him and his little charge, a miracle
A small loving child, held that secret key
To opening an old mans heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gist Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 4:39 PM
You speak truth, you get truth. Your work is a blessing to those who read it. Thank you. Good job!
Vaso Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:57 PM
I thank you , very kind of you!
Daniel Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Heart touching poem. Brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful story excellently told..a fav:)
Vaso Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, I really liked this one, so your comment is very much appreciated!
Semena Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 3:46 AM
Very touching and cute too! :)
Vaso Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Thank you kindly John.
White Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 3:30 PM
What a heart you have Arthur. You are a wonderful soul. Creative. Descriptive and vivid images. Beautiful
Vaso Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Thank you so much Kelli, very kind of you!
Y. Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:50 PM
This is a touching story. The power of love speaks loud and clear. You skillfully told the story of how a little orphan girl literally change the heart of a grumpy old man. I'm glad I stopped by to view a gigantic 7 piece. Alexis
Vaso Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:30 AM
I just read second post, you really are a very sweet person, thank you!
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Hi Arthur, did I tell you that this poem is one of my favorite poems . You are an amazing story teller, one of the best I've seen. I am so happy to have found your art:-) Alexis
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:53 PM
So very kind of you, thank you so much!!!! :)
Koven Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Great imagery. A story that is told in the heart. Allan
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Thank you so much Allan, much appreciated!!!
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 11:14 AM
A lovely and touching poem, Arthur! Yes, you are right...love sleeps but it never dies. I was hoping that it would have a happy ending, and you did not disappoint! #7 / paul
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 11:21 AM
Thank you Paul,yes not often I do that!!! LOL
Lindley Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Love is the key, faith is the test with mercy and grace the reward! A7 my friend!!!
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Thanks Robert!!!
Das Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 3:16 AM
So so beautiful. Children can win over grumpy hearts too, Congratulations. A richly deserving Poem of the Day.
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Thank you so much Nandita
Samal Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 2:35 AM
Truly a fantastic piece of poetry... Congratulations Arthur... superb...
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Very nice of you too comment, thank you!
Varadaraju Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 2:22 AM
This Poem is mixed up with a bag of Emotions and it takes us to the scene of a different world...
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Thank you kindly Manjunath!
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Wonderful story, Arthur, even grumpy people have hearts. Bless you and congratulations on Poem of the Day :~) so very well deserved.
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:41 PM
Thank you so much Eve, I hope Lucilla looked down upon us to come and read this one!! :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Oh, Arthur, how I hoped his heart would grow kinder as the girl so needed his support. God bless you for showing us that even the grumpy people in this world can have tender moments. Very heartwarming! Love, carolyn
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Thank you Carolyn, I really appreciate your so kind words!
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:48 PM
I see congrats are in order for poem of the day. Very deserving, Arthur!
Cohen Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:44 PM
I am not crying. There was a ninja chopping onion near my eyes. Such a sweet story in bitterness. Excellent writing again, Arthur :) Congrats for winning POTD
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:44 PM
ahhhhh thank you Miriam! I had those same onions around as well!!
Walker  Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations Arthur for being honored with the Poem of the Day! Verlena
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Thank you Verlena!
Bateman Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations Arthur on POTD!! A quite moving and enchanting poem with a compelling message for all. Extraordinary Work!! A "7" + FAV!! Best Always, Gary
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Thank you very much Gary!
Girardot Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Magnifique...Félicitations!
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Merci bien!!!!
Nunez Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Mr. Cowell caused me tears for two days in row! Congrats on your POTD! :)
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Thank you Kim, I will try and limit the tears for the next few days!!! :) Hugs
Diliberto Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 8:02 AM
beyond beautiful, made me cry, congrats.
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Thank you so much Mary!!
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Congrats on poem of the day - well worth a second read:-) Hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs right back!
La France Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Arthur, congratulations on this poem being chosen as poem of the day and why not, it is so breathtaking beautiful in raw emotion, sad but with that awesome ending, I was riveted to each and every word from beginning to end, 7
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:54 PM
That is so sweet Broken Wings, I really touched by your nice comments and everyone's here!
Nance Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:47 AM
You are taking over the poems of the days and weeks. Awesome you.
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Its the little capitalist inside of me, "take overs" LOL
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:41 AM
...suddenly ..... I was here again :))) - Congratulation with p.o.t.d. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Anne Lise again!!! xxx
Atfield Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 12:11 PM
“ Love Sleeps, Never Dies ” What an epoch poem !!!, exposing the under belly of human nature, created by life’s adversities, and all that it takes to bring a man’s humanity back into his consciousness . Bill . ( B. J. “A” 2 )
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Thank you William! :)
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 9:28 AM
An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page. This flows well carrying a heart felt message of love. Feelings poure out and tumble freely to the next one producing a cascading effect of warm thoughts. Emile. #7
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for such nice comments Emile, much appreciated!
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