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Love Perhaps For One

Love perhaps for one So you linger on my eyes You see my inner soul Your happiness you can’t disguise You are now feeling whole Look closer now before you fall Into the abyss Your will is gone, you come along Your thoughts are dreams of bliss You linger on the things I say Each word a treasured thing You will gladly pay the way And buy me anything Don Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/2/2011 7:23:00 PM
a beautiful piece of creative of poetry.
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:28:00 PM
another good one, like it ,
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:18:00 PM
Hey, this flowed great; I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I see wrong with the flow is the third verse of the first stanza. Other than that, I enjoyed it. Keep it up!
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:59:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed..Sara
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