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Love, Peace & Tranquility

L is for Laughter, we share Lavishly. O is for the fights that explode Occasionally V is for the insurmountable Vastness of us. E is love Eternity that is so much more than lust + + + + P is for Pacifism, to settle without a fight. E is Everlasting peace, wouldn't that be a sight. A is for Amnesty, to forgive an opposing threat. C is for our troops, waiting for this war to Cease. E is for Everyone, I wish all world peace. + + + + T is for the way she Tastes, and her Tantalizing ways. R is for our late night Rendezvous after work each day. A is our Attraction, Absolute for all our lives N is for the Nifty way I asked her to be my wife. Q is for her Quintessential fashion U is for our Unadulterated passion I is her deep blue, Indigo eyes L is for her Loud teasing cries. I is not just I, but for both of us T is for her undisputed Trust in me Y is meant for her, my gorgeous Yuppie queen... Jared Pickett 10/24/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 12/17/2009 10:25:00 AM
Wonderful acrostic Jared...many emotions emanate from every word....excellent job! Thanks so much for sharing! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:29:00 AM
Bravo....Great Acrostic Son...We both love them...Dad
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:05:00 PM
Wow I like this one lots... great tribute to your Queen and she is lucky too 2 have Asavvy 1 as her parallel... great to find your other half...yes? do appreciate your comments and I agree we are a lot alike and I smell collaboration getting closer each second... glad u like my style.. looking forward to great poem still to come from us and happy turkey day to u... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:24:00 AM
Nice tribute to the one you love. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/28/2009 2:53:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic Jared >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 11:24:00 PM
Nice message, love the acrostic look of this piece...Raul
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Date: 10/24/2009 11:38:00 AM
Awesome, the form, grand is the message, a message I personally take to my heart, brotherly love is my expression of gratitude, freely given to you without preservation. Good to have you, as I feel, a personal friend Jared! Sincerely, brotherly Love, Moses
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