Love On One Side No Love On The Other

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Love is so complicated.

How I wished that a road to your heart Hadn't come to a dead end You say you love me Or do you just pretend There's no feeling in your kiss No warmth in your smile You never tell me that I was missed You turn your back on me in bed Never listen any more And you mess around with my head I never know if I'm coming or going If the sun shines or it rains And there's no way of showing I feel trapped choked and beyond control A little lost child left out in the snow You not only took my heart but you also stole my soul I wish I'd never met you But I can't find the strength or will to go Chained and shackled to Only you have the key To unlock me And set me free.

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Silent One

Date: 3/17/2024 7:02:00 AM

Love is never simple, rarely do we meet that perfect person and rarely are there no issues.. I think I mentioned it to your before, human ego and how we think differently always effect a relationship.. I think being calm, open minded and understanding is very important, but it is difficult being with someone who is not like that...

Peter Dome
Date: 3/17/2024 2:45:00 PM

So true my friend listening is also important, and good conversation skills. I have always thought, you need to be good friends First, then build upon it. Thank you take care. Pete.