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Love of Edelweiss

This is a slightly revised repost but which was formerly deleted.)

I climbed the high mountain,
breathed in the harsh high air,
really relished the beauty
of the valley where you lived.
And all because it was a custom
to present a perfumed edelweiss
to you whom I loved
in those days gone by.
 
But you would have none of it,
rejected me out of hand.
I felt dejected and frustrated
but then remembered the old legend
how a damsel princess of old
the beauty of the vale,
remained nubile unattached,
for none deserved her hand.
Thus to her death she remained single
and all the men who loved her, wept.
They buried her high upon a mountain
and covered her grave with roses red.
But as spring came upon her grave
grew lovely white flowers whose scent
embellished the mountain tops,
and everyone agreed that
the flower should be a remembrance
of their love that remained a dream.
A flower all called edelweiss,
a memorial for eternity.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 1:10 PM
I like this tale or myth. I am glad that you shared it with us. Thank you for dropping by my page with an unusual Haiku. It is a form invented by Charles, who said to post it under Haiku. Sara
Kiser Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Quite a lovely penning for this amazingly beautiful flower. Very very nice.
Gilmour Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Ohhh Victor I truly love Edelweiss it is such a delicate fragile flower and on a visit to Austria I bought myself a dried Edelweiss in a frame. Your poem is so beautiful like the flower - a FAV for me with hugs Ann xx
Edmonds  Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:21 AM
A beautiful free verse poem Victor, love Edelweiss for it’s beauty, the song, remembrance and this lovely poem… Hugs sent your way… Belle
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:03 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Victor :) - Made me think of: "Edelweiss" the American song from the musical The Sound of Music :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Awesome dear Victor. I didn't know about this perfumed flower edelweiss and this old legend. It's fascinating. So well penned. Enjoyed reading. God bless... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:31 AM
This is gorgeous, Victor! A fave! She’s more a legend, never caught…for all…for none!
Buehler Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 12:39 PM
A captivating poem and legend, beautifully written. It is in my faves. Blessings :)
Proxenos Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 11:30 AM
What a wonderful wonderful poem Victor. I never knew that Edelweiss was a flower that grew at the top of a mountain on top of a princess's grave and these beautiful white flowers were to be known for eternity as Edelweiss. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 6:16 AM
A beautiful and sad verse, enjoyed reading
Kannan Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:24 AM
Adorable!!! So beautifully written, Victor... Loved it...
Mcconnell Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 1:37 PM
a lovely piece penned so beautifully Victor, so sad but skilled verse shines through. Blessings, Gordon
Skelly Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 6:35 AM
You have created a romantic tragedy, which I find appealing Victor...Delice
Poet Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 6:26 AM
A fantastic concept with a beautiful presentation. The insight adds to the structure's attractiveness. What a lovely piece of writing, Victor! Your talented pen steadily reveals an ancient legend as your narrative develops.
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 5:34 AM
What a charming write, Victor! Your story slowly unfolds old legend from your gifted pen. Much beauty to this memorial you wrote.
Cunningham Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 3:04 AM
Love the imagery in your tragic verse Victor, Tom
Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Wow! Great legend told beautifully in your amazing poem, Victor:)
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