Love My Jhansi

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Warriors in us, 
                      When time comes, we fight our fiercest battle
                                     to protect who we love! 

                         A dainty lass, cocooned by mother’s care,  
                                 and father’s protective arms, 
        grew up gleeful and merry, humming melodies and frolicking carefree
                                    in the lap of bountiful nature, 
          Nobody told her she was the most captivating beauty ever existed! 

       But when a Prince trotted by, and caught glimpse of an exquisite vision, 
       he couldn’t but fall in love, with the breathtaking beauty, body and soul. 
                                The Prince recognized his destiny, 
               he was certain that this symbol of elegance, he was waiting for, 
                     And didn’t waste a moment begging for her hand, 
                 It all sounds surreal, sometimes life is stranger than fairytale. 

             The exquisitely alluring queen lived a blissful life with her King, 
          Until one day life brought something utterly tragic and unforeseen - 
             The young King left her alone in this world with an infant child. 
                              The Princess became a real Queen,

                         not only occupying a jewel-encrusted throne, 
                        and wearing a tiara with Rubies and Diamonds, 
                        safeguarding the country with a powerful hand, 
                                 defending the needy and the weak. 
                             In her twenties, she transformed herself 
                            into the lion-hearted protector of the land. 

                          The demure, bashful Princess mustered her 
                               entire strength, her indomitable spirit, 
                    She decided to turn herself  into the Warrior Queen, 
                                            on a horseback, 
                      wore a warrior suit, carried her husband’s sword. 
                                It really happened, soon her land, 
                         her Jhansi, was attacked by foreign powers. 

                   The Lioness Queen was undaunted and fearless, 
      her sole goal was to protect the people from the enemy relentless. 
                            With blessings from her beloved parents, 
                         and undying love for her deceased husband, 
           The Warrior Queen went to the battlefield with her greatest power, 
                                         with supreme might. 

                   With a child on her back, she jumped on the loyal horse,   
                         She fought until her last drop of blood was shed 
                                    on the soil of her dearest Jhansi. 
                          Alive is the Warrior Queen, in the ever-chanted 
                                 melodious strains sung by her people. 

                        
                            They sing the song of a Warrior Queen 
                      who was as ornately beautiful as a dainty Rose, 
                      and as valiantly courageous as the Mother Earth. 


Reference: Lakshmibai, the Rani of Jhansi was an Indian queen of the Maratha princely state of Jhansi in North India. She was one of the leading figures of the Indian Rebellion of 1857 and became a symbol of resistance. (Wikipedia)


            Originally Written For  Warrior Contest (Title: A Warrior Queen)
                                           Sponsor: Silent One
                                                FIRST PLACE
                                              
                     For "L" Old Or New Poetry Contest (Title:Lionhearted)
                                      Sponsor: Constance La France
                                                 FIRST PLACE

                               For "Meaning Of Love" Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
                                                FIRST PLACE

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Date: 8/27/2022 8:19:00 PM
A marvelous poem my dear friend Mala. I love it and enjoyed a lot. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your first place win! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 8/27/2022 9:58:00 PM
Thank you Len. Appreciate your beautiful comments.
Date: 8/27/2022 5:52:00 PM
You have created a spectacular Poem from this story Mala! Congratulations on winning First placement my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. This story is true, and really inspiring! She is still remembered for her bravery, and love for her country.
Date: 8/27/2022 4:22:00 PM
Great write, Malabika, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Truly appreciate your comment.
Date: 9/22/2021 9:41:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful poem, excellent writing, I like your original title ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. Sorry for the long delay in replying. This story has so many aspects to inspire.
Date: 9/21/2021 10:48:00 AM
Love this story Mala - captivating from beginning to end. So many impactful, almost magical, elements in this coming of age story legend. In a way all of us are called to be warriors and given the tools to defend our "land." Congratulations on your win dear friend! Hugs and much love.
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Sam. Really appreciate your comment. This story is truly magical!
Date: 9/18/2021 9:55:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. A wonderful picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:31:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Appreciate your lovely comment.
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